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for The Devil Came to Town

by Writer3999

schedule April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So cute :P Does everyone turn into a fox or is it just Vachel? Update again soon!!!
schedule April 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so THAT was weird! Vachel is now a fox? Why? Won't that get in the way of his relationship with Damien? lol
schedule April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. A little confusing at times, but very entertaining. Please keep updating.
schedule April 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I was following this story from the beginning; I swear I was! But now I'm lost. Totally lost. I thought Vachel ran into the room? When did he take his clothes off? And did he change into an animal????????? I'm so confused.....
schedule March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I had to re-read the talking, eating dolls bit, it was too funny! I'm so curious about Nicky, tho, are we ever gonna find out the scoop on him? I kinda thought at the beginning, that Nicky and Vachel were gonna hook up, but I guess that would be pretty difficult if Nicky never comes out of their basement! hahaha
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting better and better! Love the twists and turns. Wonder what happens after the sun goes down? Now I really can't wait until the next update!!
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a great chapter! I was on the edge of my seat w/all the shenanigans going on at the nightclub! So funny; all those high school (and middle school) kids searching for vampires! And what's with Whelan's b/f, Goth boy? What a creep he is! I can't wait to see how Vashel (did I spell it right?) talks himself out of this one! hahah
schedule March 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I read this all in one shot! What a GREAT imagination you have!!!!! Demons and devils and leaving the house to KILL people!!!! I thought they were talking about leaving the house to MOVE OUT!!! Boy, I didn't see THAT one coming from Enma!!!! What a kooky lady! What a kooky family; their family and Damien's family! And I like your choice of the name Damien! 666 right! hahah

Ok, I'm REALLY FUCKING confused about Nicky! Ok, so he killed someone, I'm guessing seven yrs. ago? When Whelan was in the hospital getting his rabies shot. So, why is he in Vachel's family's basement? Why isn't he in his house? Do his parents still live there? I was assuming he was the same as as Vachel, but he's 22, so did he go crazy when he killed Jeff? And what do you mean he doesn't have to go to the bathroom? There's no bathroom in the basement???????? He must really smell! lol

Anyway, I'm enjoying this wacky story. I can't wait for your next chapter!
schedule March 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I'm definitely intrigued- keep updating!!
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schedule March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story. I would love to read more.