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for Daniel and Denial

by Koira

schedule August 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey Koira!

I was just thinking of this story today and realized it hadn't been updated in like FOREVER!!!! Are you going to continue with it??? It was such an excellent story and I miss reading about those two boys!
schedule May 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! XD This story is getting better and better with every chapter. I'm really looking forvard for more. ^-^
schedule May 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Damn! The chapter's over!! Already! Shit! Now I have to wait god knows how long for an update!!! lol

I absolutely LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this story!!! Poor Daniel; this Miggle guy thought he was making fun of him and gays! Now he knows he's serious! I can't wait to find out what the rest of their conversation will be like!

Please, please, please hurry with the update!!! Pretty please????:)
schedule April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
When will they meet again? Who will call first? XD I'm curious and hope you'll continue soon. ^-^
schedule April 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohmygoodness, I am so hooked!!! I love this story already and can't wait to read more!
schedule April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh God, Daniel is so funny! From the beginning of the chapter, to the end, his inner thoughts made me laugh througout the chapter! I can't even remember all of them, but he is one funny dude! (which only means, that YOU are one funny dude or dudette! ok, lame but you know what I'm trying to say)

I LOVE your writing style. Just listening to Daniels thought process and what his brain is saying WHILE HE IS OTHERWISE DISPOSED, is so comical! And the scenes, like the kissing scenes in the last chapter and this chapter, omg, I feel like a fly on the wall! Your descriptions are so dead on and his inner turmoil is so humorous. I just can't get enough of this story! It took me all friggen day to read this one chapter! There were a ton of people over (I don't even celebrate Easter!) and they kept bothering me, when all I wanted to do was read this amazing, awesome chapter from this amazing, awesome author!

I CANNOT WAIT until the next update; Daniel better be thinking about Joshua the WHOLE ENTIRE TIME HE'S GONE! And he better be back soon! lol
schedule April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*blushing* that was hot! looking forward to the next update ^_^
person Anon
schedule April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Pleeeeaaase continue!
schedule March 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Bah. I always come into stories right when they're currently stopped on a cliffhanger.
Grrr. Can't wait for the update.
person DarkSacrifice
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Geez, I don't like his brother that much.
But Joshua *cough* Judy and Daniel are so cute together!
Damn it Daniel! Just get over your stupid phrase and go with the flow ~
I loved this chapter! I was on edge the whole time...what if someone discovers, what if Joshua's wig will get all wrong and messy, or his make up,....anything!! gaahhh.
Please update soon! I wanna know if something bad is going to happen!!