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for Daniel and Denial

by Koira

person eien
schedule May 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh,wow.WOW.
That was scorching hot! I didn't read a scene like that in while.It is usually the boring one finger, two fingers, three fingers and we make love thing lol. But this...This is man on man action, full of testosterone and hotness.Even though Joshua had effeminate traits, he's such a BOY! I ususally avoid stories with "trans" labels on them because most of the time, people use it like an excuse to write the character behave like a woman.
Also, the realistic feel of this, especially Daniel's reactions and such is pure win!
person eien
schedule May 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aw, poor Daniel. He's so adorable though.
It is so realistic. I really like the fact that you didn't jump and made the two accidentally meet again or that Daniel would immediately go back to Joshua. Showing how Daniel tries to understand himself and everything was a very clever and makes sense. As a reader, I feel like I'm closer to the character, that I understand him more. Good job!
schedule April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow their phone conversations have progressed... Looking forward to seeing them reunite again.
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omfg, I have been waiting for an update to this amazing story for AGES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you for updating!!!!! :)

Unfortunately for me, I can't read it now, but as soon as I get back from picking up kids, I'll devour this latest chapter! :)
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg, what a GREAT, GREAT chapter! Of course I had to re-read the last few chapters to "get in the mood", lol, to remember Daniel's mood and such.

The phone sex was just too cute! I love it that he decided he DID want to see Joshua again (thank God he's trying to deny his denial! haha)!

Can't wait to see what happens when they meet again. :)

Awesome chapter, thanks so much for updating; this is one of my favorite stories on here! :) It's been wayyyyy toooooo long between updates; hopefully the next one will be quicker? (hint, hint)
schedule December 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Koira,

I just wanted to wish you a very happy New Year and I hope all is well and you're not forgetting about this most awesome story! (hint, hint, poke, poke) :)

Have a wonderful New Year's! :)
person Anon
schedule October 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhh I want more!!! Wonderful story hope you update soon.

Dieby
schedule September 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Omg, Koira!

I'm so flattered that you're personally addressing my reviews and little pokes for the story to continue!

It's YOUR writing that's amazing, not my little reviews. And you read the reviews of new stories first? Doesn't that kind of ruin the story? hahah I'm really flattered that you like my choices of stories! hahah Yeah, some stories I can't even get thru the first few paragraphs! But YOUR story is incredible!!!!!

So, thank you for your kind words and I need to read the latest chapter now!

Good luck with all your moving issues! What country are you in now?


Lisa
schedule September 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wait! What? They've been talking every day for WEEKS and not ONCE is seeing each other again mentioned????? And what's with the I'm sure you'll find someone bullshit. They already found each other!!!! lol

Some of these things Daniel thinks are just so funny: Did you ever notice that you randomly vomit secret information when you're drinking? His inner ramblings are hysterical!

And what restaurant in America did Daniel and Miggle go to where there are ASHTRAYS?????? lol I was hoping those were a thing of the past....

It was so cute to see Daniel procrastinating calling Joshua; he did everything humanly possible in his apartment just so the time got later and later and he wouldn't have to call!

So, thank you again Koira, for the extremely kind words in your A/N and since you're all moved in to your new country, hopefully you'll update the next chapter soon????? I'm keeping my fingers crossed! :)
schedule September 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad u updated this, A slow update is better than a no update :)
love the story, can't wait to see their relationship develop.