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June 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really love the story.your writing skills are awesome.
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January 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Koira! I loved this latest chapter! :)
Daniel is becoming more at ease with Joshua. I loved it when he explained to Joshua that he doesn't want any girls, he just wants Joshua.
Tim was really funny! I was laughing so hard at that scene!
I can't wait for the next update. I'm sure that Daniel and Joshua both won't want Daniel to leave. And hey, what does Peter say about all of Daniel's disappearances? lol
Daniel is becoming more at ease with Joshua. I loved it when he explained to Joshua that he doesn't want any girls, he just wants Joshua.
Tim was really funny! I was laughing so hard at that scene!
I can't wait for the next update. I'm sure that Daniel and Joshua both won't want Daniel to leave. And hey, what does Peter say about all of Daniel's disappearances? lol
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January 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So I'm reading all the reviews after mine was posted, and I saw that back on July 30, 2012 you responded to one of my reviews! I should have checked there for any news, but I actually never thought of it!
I'm sorry! But thank you so much for responding! I'm sad that back then you said there would be only two chapters left of the story, and you just posted one, so there's one more left? That makes me so sad. I love this story so much! :)
I hope your move to the other country went well. It must be so exciting going to all these different places and seeing the different cultures. I wish I could just get out of Connecticut (USA) once in a while.
I'm sorry! But thank you so much for responding! I'm sad that back then you said there would be only two chapters left of the story, and you just posted one, so there's one more left? That makes me so sad. I love this story so much! :)
I hope your move to the other country went well. It must be so exciting going to all these different places and seeing the different cultures. I wish I could just get out of Connecticut (USA) once in a while.
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January 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you have updated. Finally! I really wondered wether something happened to you.
That being said, I was slightly disappointed by the new chapter. It did not have the same flair as the previous chapters. It probably was because there was no real built up like in the other chapters, keeping me breathless, in suspense. Instead you drove right in with far too many technicalities for my taste. Or maybe it was simply that after that enourmous built up throughout the previous chapters leading to that sex scene, I expected more "sensational sensations". That sex scene was, at lest to me, not up to par with Daniel's fantasy. Also I think that the sex as you wrote it did not suit the characters as you discribed them before. Joshua said in one of the earlier chapters that he prefered to bottom, even though his partners always wanted him to top. Also Daniel's major inner conflict was not acted out realistically. I can strongly believe that he'd forget his embarassment and insecurities in the heat of the moment so to speak, but I think it would catch up with him soon enough. Basically, that sex scene was pretty universal and very similar ones can probably already be found on the site. I'm not being mean. It's just that your previous chapters were so amazing they've raised my expectations quite a lot.
I'm still glad you've updated though and hope you'll update again soon.
That being said, I was slightly disappointed by the new chapter. It did not have the same flair as the previous chapters. It probably was because there was no real built up like in the other chapters, keeping me breathless, in suspense. Instead you drove right in with far too many technicalities for my taste. Or maybe it was simply that after that enourmous built up throughout the previous chapters leading to that sex scene, I expected more "sensational sensations". That sex scene was, at lest to me, not up to par with Daniel's fantasy. Also I think that the sex as you wrote it did not suit the characters as you discribed them before. Joshua said in one of the earlier chapters that he prefered to bottom, even though his partners always wanted him to top. Also Daniel's major inner conflict was not acted out realistically. I can strongly believe that he'd forget his embarassment and insecurities in the heat of the moment so to speak, but I think it would catch up with him soon enough. Basically, that sex scene was pretty universal and very similar ones can probably already be found on the site. I'm not being mean. It's just that your previous chapters were so amazing they've raised my expectations quite a lot.
I'm still glad you've updated though and hope you'll update again soon.
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January 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Koira!!!!!!!!!!!!! You're back!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG, you just made my day!!!!! Holy shit! I thought this story was a goner for sure!!!!
This was one of my favorite stories! I'm so glad you're continuing with it!!!
Ok, now I gotta go back and refresh my memory with the other chapters. lol
This was one of my favorite stories! I'm so glad you're continuing with it!!!
Ok, now I gotta go back and refresh my memory with the other chapters. lol
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July 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey Lisa,
yes, of course I will not leave this story unfinished! I know I'm really slow and I'm sorry for it, but I definitely won't just abandon it. If you follow the countdown-ish pattern of the chapter titles, you will see that there are two more chapters to go. Both are about 50% done so far. I'll try and get a move on ;) I'm always on the move anyway, I'm moving to another country again this week, never stay anywhere for to long...
Anyway, yes, D&D will be finished. Hopefully soon. I'm writing on other stories as well, but at my current rate, it'll take me about ten years to finish them -_-"
yes, of course I will not leave this story unfinished! I know I'm really slow and I'm sorry for it, but I definitely won't just abandon it. If you follow the countdown-ish pattern of the chapter titles, you will see that there are two more chapters to go. Both are about 50% done so far. I'll try and get a move on ;) I'm always on the move anyway, I'm moving to another country again this week, never stay anywhere for to long...
Anyway, yes, D&D will be finished. Hopefully soon. I'm writing on other stories as well, but at my current rate, it'll take me about ten years to finish them -_-"
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July 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey Koira! I happened to see your name in a review of a story I just started reading.
Which got me to thinking about YOUR story.
You know the story about Daniel who starts to fall for this college kid named Josh.....it was such a fantastic story that I looked forward to reading each time you updated.
But I noticed it hasn't been updated in over A YEAR!!!! (gasp!) How could so much time have passed?
Will you come back to the story or is it going to remain unfinished?
Which got me to thinking about YOUR story.
You know the story about Daniel who starts to fall for this college kid named Josh.....it was such a fantastic story that I looked forward to reading each time you updated.
But I noticed it hasn't been updated in over A YEAR!!!! (gasp!) How could so much time have passed?
Will you come back to the story or is it going to remain unfinished?
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July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like your writing style - very easy to read.
I hope you have plans to complete this at some point. I've really enjoyed the story so far.
I hope you have plans to complete this at some point. I've really enjoyed the story so far.
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March 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Koira, Koira, Koira!
I saw you commented on this story we're both reading, so I thought I'd nudge you, hint, hint, poke, poke. What have Daniel and Joshua been up to lately?
I really love this story and I hope you continue it. :)
I saw you commented on this story we're both reading, so I thought I'd nudge you, hint, hint, poke, poke. What have Daniel and Joshua been up to lately?
I really love this story and I hope you continue it. :)
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November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I seriously hope you weren't abducted! I love your story and I will keep checking back every day to catch the latest chapter. :)
Keep it going, your writing is amazing!
Keep it going, your writing is amazing!