rate_review Reviews

I'm sorry, I'm a horrible reviewer. I read your story SURRENDER like 3 times and I think I only reviewed once. I've been reading this the whole time and have yet to give one review. I love the story and especially love that Arabel plays a sufficiant role in the story.

I love your writing style. Your story beginings are always catchy and throw me on a ride. Just when I wonder where exactly the story is going and what is going to happen, everything comes together in the most pleasing way possible. I also have to hand it to you, I've never read a story with a mmf threesome or one with tentacle rape in it that has made me want to keep reading on.

My only qualms so far:
I swear every dude in your stories has an enormous bead of precome when they're horny. Idk why I care but it's a reoccuring thing and I keep getting like dejavu or something.
I WANT MORE ARABELxDEVO LOVIN'!!!!!!!! pleeeaaaaasssseeeee? I'm begging over here. You know you want to!

Just read SURRENDER and have caught up with SURREAL and am loving the storyline - please update soon! I really want to know whats happening wth Erik!

you are a very evil person... gahhh cliffhangers!! NUUU! Anyways~ A wonderful chapter as always and I can't wait for more ^^

Just where the hell Erik is???? >.< J is dying!!!!!! he is hid bodyguard! he was supposed to take care of him!!! where is he?! :(

Ahhh... hello by the way! I was angry! :p

It's good to see Devo And Abi again! :D also the rest of family! I had missed them!

keep up the great job and please update soon! ;)

are you telling me that jael died? oh no! please no! i just found your new story and i read it non-stop! please let them find jael! and i hope he is still okay

Ohhh... great, so are we going to see more of Devo and Arabel in this fic too? :D

Now, it seems that things are getting in to place...

and Erik ... a Relic! I wonder what kind of a abilities he has! lol

Well update soon, I can't wait to read more! this is a very bad cliffy!!!;)

I just see your response! I think you have to add in your summery that this is kind of the sequel to the Survival series. This way more people gonna keep track of it! By all means they have to know who Devo and Arabel and Woen and Jubek are! Otherwise it doesn't have any meaning!

and I forgot to say, I am really happy that I got to see more of Jubek and Woen! I was kind of disappointed at the end of Survival! but now, I am very happy! :P

Update soon,

Thanks

And I meant SURRENDER all the time that I said Survival! may bad! :P

Hello hello,

You can't imagine how happy I got when I saw you have started a new fic! I read SURRENDER first and then SURVIVAL. I have to say I liked SURRENDER way better than SURVIVAL but still both were great! and now this one! :D I'm soooo happy! ^_^ I think people like me, have not found this one yet! :p

Ja’el is sooo cute and the first chapter was so heart wrenching! Erik is sooo cool! I like him! ;) and they are going somewhere they shouldn't! I hope nothing bad happens to them!

Well can't wait to read more! update soon ^_^

Jubek!!! :D

is that what he was called?? I like him yaaaayyy :) xxx