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December 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
more please! I love this
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September 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I sincerely hope you finish this. I am officially HOOKED! lots of emotion, sexy descriptions and an intriguing plot. Very few on this site can boast having all three of these traits.
Great work, looking forward to more.
Great work, looking forward to more.
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September 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's decent so far. However, some of the wording in chapter one is kind of awkward and unnatural at times. In chapter two, "Tudors" should be "Tutors" (the first being the name of a royal family, the second being people who help with studies). In chapter three, "insure" should be "ensure". There were some other technical issues but it wasn't bad overall.
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September 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
would like to read more of this. please continue writing this story
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September 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it!! Very well written, and I love the plot to it!! I really do hope to see more between Bailey and Brian though. Seems like such a sweet guy. Please keep writing!! And if you need a beta, I'm all for it!
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June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
when are you going to update?? i am interested!!! its really good so far and i want to see where you are taking it.
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February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I can't wait to see where you go with this. It looks like you've quite the plot and hopefully lots of smut to come....because I love the smut, lol.