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February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 1
Interesting start. It sort of reminded me of another high school fic where the main character called his crush "Adonis" also. So, now I want to reread it and can't remember the name :)
So far this looks pretty good, it's been a while since we've seen a good high school story.
Interesting start. It sort of reminded me of another high school fic where the main character called his crush "Adonis" also. So, now I want to reread it and can't remember the name :)
So far this looks pretty good, it's been a while since we've seen a good high school story.
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February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I liked your first two chapters. It looks like there will be some rivalry between Adam and Gabriel's brother. This should be interesting.