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February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Gabriel. It is tough to be the scrawny younger brother of a jock. I hope he gets to see Adam soon.
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February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I feel so bad for Gabriel; always so alone. Hopefully not for long! Hahah
I would never know English isn't your native tongue! There were a few words here and there that should have had the ing or ed after them, but really no big deal. To me, you write like you were born in the U.S.!
And yes, to answer you comments to my comments, I'm in for Adam beating Chris' ass! lol
I would never know English isn't your native tongue! There were a few words here and there that should have had the ing or ed after them, but really no big deal. To me, you write like you were born in the U.S.!
And yes, to answer you comments to my comments, I'm in for Adam beating Chris' ass! lol
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February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i actually like this story, i like the way u r doing it and i'm drawen in by Gabriel and Adam and i come back everyday to see if u added to the story. it is almost like a TV show.
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February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love it! I think Adam will feel more protective of Gabriel every time Chris snubs him. Very sweet story. I am looking forward to their game.
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February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
There is nothing I love more than a high school boys love story.Adonis is a gentle jock. He likes Gabriel but not his brother.
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February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Gabriel and shame on Chris not defending his brother! He and his friends suck! lol
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February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! Gabriel seems pretty amusing and Adam does not seem like the typical jock! I had to laugh when Adam said they were in the same history class! How did Gabriel not notice him?!
Anyway, great story and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Anyway, great story and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm pretty sure it was a kiss that woke sleeping beauty, so in this case it should also be a kiss. I am absolutely loving this fic. It is something i would love to see continuing. I can't wait to see Adam's POV again and see what he thinks of Gabriel and his connection to Willow. I just really want to his what he thinks of Gabriel, period.
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February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! I'm glad that Adonis, er, Adam, isn't getting annoyed with Gabriel bumping into him all the time and Gabriel spacing out all the time! Maybe soon they can have an actual conversation where Gabriel will last more than two minutes w/o spacing out! Hhahahah
Great chapter, a little short tho, but great! I look forward to the next one!
Great chapter, a little short tho, but great! I look forward to the next one!
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February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the image of the two boys under the tree. I like the gentle attraction between the two. Very cute chapter.