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Very nice work here!!! Loved the chapters so far!

Adam's so cute; realizing he'd rather spend time w/Gabriel than the football team. I wonder if he's gonna ask Gabriel to the party? That'll really piss Chris off, huh? And the cheerleader also, who'll want undoubtably (I know that's not spelled right, but can't find the right spelling for it!) get into Adam's pants! Hahahah

Good chapter, could be a little longer tho.....

i have to say this such a cute little stoy and i cant wait for more chapters to come, i like the chareciters and i like the set as well as how you describe the interactions as well as the inner cheraicter as well! :) so keep up the good work

another good one keep them coming and ill keep coming back to read. i do like how now theres a female tring to get adam's atention, that should b very intresting how it plays out

As short as that chapter was, i liked it. I can't wait for the romance to start.

Another character to hate? I wonder who that could be? I'm just kidding. I wonder how Gabriel would hold up against Miss Cheerleader in a catfight? LOL. I really enjoyed this chapter. Even Chris was being nice. I am looking forward to lunchtime.

First, congratulations on making me hate Jennifer right from the start. I have a feeling she will try to be quite the obstacle for shy, little, adorable Gabriel. As for the parents, I think it is better if they stay clueless for a bit longer. I love Gabriel but I want to see him ignored by his parents for a bit longer. I kind of have this fantasy in which Adam is the one who tells his parents off or Gabriel gets really upset and finally stands up to his parents and his jerk of a brother. However, you are the author and therefore, you should decide how your story will proceed. I do really like the ending of the last chapter. I could totally picture that goofy grin on Adam's face. This is just a crazy suggestion, but how would the story go if one of Jennifer's cronies or Chris himself witnessed the interaction between Adam and Gabriel and Adam's reaction to it. That could get interesting. Would they try to stop the two from getting any closer. Perhaps there might be a confrontation during the party? I'm just getting carried away now, so I think it is best if I shut up. Thank you for the speedy update. I can't wait to read about Adam and Gabriel's little lunch date.

Gosh, Chris is such a jerk! But if Gabriel was Adam's brother, then it would completely change this story. So I think it serves the story better that they are not related. What does Gabriel do during his brother's games? Do his parents even care? Thanks for the update! Please keep them coming.

Oh, I hope Gabriel sees Adam again. Even if Gabriel never asks, isn't it good parenting to try and include your child in everything you do as a "family?" Gabriel's parents need to read some parenting books. Also, I feel as if the mom isn't telling the whole truth about Gabriel never wanting to be outside or being too much of an introvert when he was a child. Wouldn't it make sense that you would encourage your child to try out outdoor activities with others to break them out of their reclusive habits? Hmmm, I wonder if I'm right. And if I am, what is the real story? I can't wait to find out. Please update.

I like this story. It makes me more excited every day thinking "What's gonna happen next?" Keep it going :-)