rate_review Reviews

YAYYYYYYYYYYY!I liked it. I wish more straight guys could be like Adam. lol So will it be the next chapter chris gets is ass kicked or the chapter after that? lol j/k. Keep it comming

Love the sap! Love Adam's mom; she's pretty cool.

And thank you for not getting upset w/my constructive criticism. I only do it to help!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh - the pain! Chris is such a dumbass. He just brought out all of Gabriel's insecurities and trampled all over them. I think that Chris is really telling Gabriel what Chris' own feelings are - Gabriel is a nerd and Chris could never be his friend. I hope Gabriel will be able to see that Adam is a different person and that Chris cannot speak on his behalf. I hope Adam is coming to the rescue. I can't wait!

AAAAWWWW...Is it Adam to the rescue again? I hope so. Chris is such a JERK! I just want to deck him. God, I hope Adam does at some point. I was a little bit surprised at Gabriel's reaction to what Chris said, though. Somehow I felt as if he felt too much emotion. Since the beginning he always seemed very indifferent to other people's opinions of him, even his own family's. I was just really surprised that he would feel so hurt over what Chris said. Anyway, that was kind of sad. Hopefully the next chapter will be much happier, preferably with Adam hugging Gabriel while providing comfort.

I really, Really, REALLY hope Adam beats the crap out of Chris! What a creep! Anyway, I love this story, just found it, and it's awesome.

OMG, poor Gabe! Sounds like Adam is on his way to save him and reassure him that he's being Gabe's friend, for real, not using him for h/w or a bet or whatever.

I hate this emotional angst! Chris should be shot! No, ok, not shot, but seriously, what a cruel thing to say and to think that Adam is using Gabriel b/c Gabriel's not worthy of having any friends? Especially the captain of the football team? How sad for Gabe that his own brother thinks like this.

And I have to commend you: the chapter was perfect! The whole structure and format now is so much easier to read! Thank you so much for fixing it! I absolutely LOVE this story, so thank you for making it much easier to read! And thank you for not getting pissed at me and for listening! There are people on here (well, ok, one people!) who justs writes out of her ass and doesn't give a shit how it comes out. So thank you for not getting upset! Anything I say is only constructive; I would never be mean-spirited about it!

Anyway, can't wait to read about Adam saving his Gabe! lol

Chris is a fucking jerk! Someone has to kick his ass. Good chapter. I'll be waiting tomorow for number 10.

Love it! I am guessing that Chris does not like to share his space or his friends or his anything with his younger brother. What a shame. That is okay though because that leaves more of Gabriel for Adam to take care of. They are very charming together. I wonder if Jennifer has realized that she is striking out? I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Gabriel:1, Chris:0. It definitely seems like Gabriel is more mature than his supposedly "older" brother. Gabriel and Adam are so adorable together. And that fluttering inside that Adam feels, I think that's called infatuation, which sometimes turns into something more. Gabriel's White Knight is so sweet. I can't wait to see what Gabriel thinks of Adam after the party scene. I can't wait for more.

Chapter 8 was nice. I think the romance is comming very soon. I HOPE the romance is comming very soon