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I like this but it stops before getting to the good parts like Adam beating Chris' ass. Please update!

i love this sweet adorable story and if you don't continue i will be gravely saddened!

Please please please continue this I really love it and I wanna know what happens next

OMG I FREAKIN LOVED THIS!! They are sooooo cute!!! >.< I see it's been awhile since you updated :( I was so focused on reading this and I got to the end of chapter 10 and saw there wasn't a next chapter, I screamed! lol. Pleasssssse update soon! Let me know when you're going to update, my email is bandgeekette1990@aol.com. I love this story!!

This is great, keep up the good work.

WAAH! I want another chapter! Pretty please with puppy eyes? This story is too sweet to not have an ending.

Is it too soon for them to kiss? I'm dying for some kissing :-)

it just keeps getting better and better. i do like how u slowly ease into their relationship, it makes a good story. U should read a book called Rainbow Boys it's really good.

Adam, Gabriel's not a friend, he's a love-interest. I can't wait to see what Adam does to Chris the next time they see each other. Has Adam's mom already caught on to the fact that her son likes a boy before said son has even realized it? I hope so. A mom like that seems like the perfect ally. That could just be me. I think the image of Onyx with his head on Gabriel's lap is really cute. In fact, the image I have in my head of Onyx, Gabriel, and Adam sitting together is just so cute. Now, Chris is definitely in deep trouble, since Gabriel now has two strong protectors. YAY! Please keep the chapters coming!

It is so cute. I think both Adam and Onyx have fallen for Gabriel. I am glad that Gabriel did not believe Chris's lies. I think the chapter was very realistically done and the affection between the two was quite realistic as well. This is the sweetest young romance ever. i am really enjoying it.