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for Starry Night

by WolfsDen

person kylee123
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very intriguing story. I hope Blake will be okay. I am so sorry for Jack. I kind of wish he would stay with Blake in Mooncrest.
person DekorxAo
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhghh you and your cliffhangers! *SIGH* lol

I'm wondering why the police haven't given up on his "parents", I mean, if they haven't reported him missing yet they probably wont? I really hope we figure out the reason the Sidhe has to bring Singer up there every night!
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WAHHHHHHH!!!! OMG!!! His presence is somehow related to the health of Blake and thus Mooncrest??? Holy crap!!!! You are totally mean for leaving it here.
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is adorable. I just came across it, and now I am bouncing in anticipation of more. As an off-hand note, I noticed some grammar mistakes that could be corrected, but nothing that detracted from the story itself. If you like, I would be more than happy to beta this story for spelling and grammar - I wouldn't dream of touching the plot, because I love it the way it is :D My email is EmruasCat @ yahoo . com if you'd like my help. Even if you don't, I'm going to keep reading because, as I said at the beginning of this review, this story is absolutely adorable.
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WAAA you're so good!!! Thank you for the quick update!! OMG I totally love this and the whole "blue star"....so awesome!!!
person kikib77
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm glad they are okay!
person kaylez24
schedule February 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't want Shane with Carter. Carter has proven himself to be shallow and judgemental. It does seem like Shane is finally figuring out who is responsible for his world skipping. Now all that's left is finding out why?
person janas
schedule February 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great finally getting some anwers...another good chapter
keep it up
person janas
schedule February 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ahhh
it took a couple of days, thats a shame

i suppose if u update everyday then i should review everyday so yea...


i like dat the chapters are getting longer, the characters are starting to develope, still have no idea whats going on but that keeps da whole story interesting. but its a good story so keep it up

j
schedule February 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your story is good.. you said you haven't receieved a whole lot of reviews lately, so I figured I'd help you out.
I wonder what they are?
Keep it up.