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March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is just amazing! I'm actually kinda glad I waited until you had written 21 chapters to start reading it! It's already pure torture to wait for the 22nd chapter, I don't think I'd have been able to wait for each and every chapter up until now lol. It's so good! I can't wait for the next update!
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March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter. The story is very intriguing. It seems as if Jack is always trying to run away from Blake. I am not sure how he really feels about him. I am fascinated by the mystery of Jack and his travels between planets.
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March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ahh i think the longer chapters are really the better ones
so keep it up
so keep it up
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March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please don't let this story die like those other stories which never get updated!
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March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ur bk wit da longest chapter to date...dats awesome
i like how da plot is developing keep it up
i like how da plot is developing keep it up
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March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohh noooooo! not with Officer Carter! I don't see any good coming out of it! Carter could discover his secret and might hurt him!
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March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
things are heating up.....nice
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March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Run Shane run. That policeman is gonna eat you. LOL
Seriously Carter is not to be trusted. He judged Shane when he was still Jake. Judged him based on his looks and people's bad opinions. Clearly Carter is a shallow person.
Seriously Carter is not to be trusted. He judged Shane when he was still Jake. Judged him based on his looks and people's bad opinions. Clearly Carter is a shallow person.
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February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story just gets better and better. I can't seem to wait for updates (I'm an idiot, because you update every day)
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February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
the plot is really coming along now
im hooked so update soon
im hooked so update soon