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Laevi, this was a delightful chapter. Menno is like a pot of gold at the end of the rainbow. He is just perfect for Frank and so full of surprises. I love how the story started off with Frank being the older more experienced character, and now it turns out that Menno is actually the one who will be teaching Frank about love. It is wonderful to see Frank discover what he has been missing out on. I am really enjoying this one.

Wow. I'm incoherent for the moment. Just wow.

I'm in awe of your fast update. Lovely chapter, and I liked how Menno was the one guiding their moment together. Frank should be very, very afraid (in a good way)of what Menno has in store for him XD

*groans* I'm addicted! Thank you so much for the quick update. It'll fix me for a bit.

Oh, so sweet! I think when Frank finally comes out, he'll realize that the majority of the people, family, friends, won't care and won't look at him differently. At least I hope.....

Great chapter; it's so nice to see Frank and Menno getting closer.

Great chapter. I love Menno. He is so cute. I am proud of him for telling Frank that he will not be a secret lover. I think the joy of being in a relationship will help Frank to find the strength to eventually come out. Frank needs to do something about that empty space in Menno's bed. Plus they both bought those condoms. They need to try them out and make sure that they are working properly.

I was about to go workout when I noticed this new story so I had to read at least one chapter! I love this so far. I am using this as motivation to do my workout- if I don't do it, I won't read on to chapter two *gurr* So based on chapter 1 alone, I know I am going to enjoy this. I love Frank, he really seems like a teddy bear to me. I also loved that you didn't have Frank and Menno "coincidentally" paired up in the beginning. I read too many stories that it becomes blah after a while. I know they will end up working together (yay!) but the fact that it didn't start out that way is nice.

When I'm done I will come back and read and review the rest.
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I'm back and read up to chapter 4. I really adore this. When Frank and Menno were doing their word tango to see if the other was gay, I was snikering the entire time. And I loved Frank's reaction when he finally realised what Menno meant by "clingy" lol. Frank's insecurities are sad but will make for a great read as he battles keeping the relationship a secret from everyone while Menno is less inclined to do so, as well as Menno's fear that Frank will get bored of him. Looking forward to your next update!

Hello,

it's me again and I wonder how it happens that a good story like this get so little response, while others, much worse one receive tens of comments per each chapter. It'll never stop amazing me.

But anyway, here's my comment :) I'm so glad that those two choose to 'abstain' (yeah, I know, they both need their sweet time with their hands but that's beside the point) despite their apparent chemistry. It'll help Menno trust Frank in the long term and from what you let on, it'll be quite necessary. Frank score a lot of points in my eyes, telling 'no' the sex, that is a very mature attitude, plus, it'll make their eventual love-making all the more sweet :)

Can't wait to read the next chapter and I'm keeping fingers crossed so that it comes as soon as possible. Good luck writing it and thank you for this chapter :)

teeta

Excellent chapter. Well thought out and very well written. I loved the super hot ending. I hope Frank will be able to sleep with all those sexy images of Menno going through his head. Menno definitely has some insecurities about relationships, so it was good for Frank to show him that he wants more than just sex. Both characters are nicely matched because Menno might be confused about relationships but he was brave enough to come out to his family. Frank has the bigger challenge of deciding if he is going to come out to his family and friends. I cant wait to see what happens. Awesome story.