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I don't know if I reviewed yet, but I'm reading and loving this story. As much as I like other slash stories, it's always nice to see something "real" among all this obvious fiction ;)

Woohoo! This chapter got very hot very quickly. Frank is falling into the role of dom very quickly. He is picking up his skills really fast. Excellent sex scenes! I love to see how Frank and Menno are figuring each other out. Lovely chapter. I can't wait for the next one.

I am so proud of Frank's progress. Menno is amazing at getting Frank to become more comfortable at public displays of affection: not pushing too hard but not letting Frank run away either. I can't help but think that those girls were actually rabid fangirls who smelled slashy goodness and just wanted to provoke a little show!

I needed this story today. I'm sick and stuck on the couch, so thank you. Frank and Mennow are amazing. I can't get enough of them.

THEY FINALLY DID IT! YEAH!

Ok, now that I got that out of the way....
Great story so far. I really love the rest of your stories as well. I wasn't too keen with bears, but you make them so damn lovable that I started loving them too! Great job! XD

Well, they finally did it! I think they're both "reacting" and very emotionally charged. They should take it easy. Frank wants Menno to move right in and they'll live happily ever after in a fantasy world. That's not reality. For the most part anyway. Menno should definitely NOT move in so soon! They have to take things slower, get to know one another first.

Anyway, that's my two cents! lol Great chapter and I look forward to the next one. I wonder how they'll act at work? They better be careful; I don't know how accepting the construction field is....

I think Menno is so good for Frankie. Menno is giving Frank the confidence he needs to be who he really wants to be. I think w/Menno by his side Frank can do anything! It was such a big step for him to for him and Menno to show affection with one another out in public. He'll need Mennno's support telling his father though; sounds like his father is a real homophobic prick! lol

I loved the trip to the beach. Poor squealing girls! I bet they converted to spying fangirls very quickly. It is hard to resist spying if there is hot man on man action going on nearby. Menno has sweet talked Frank into coming out a little bit. I think that is a good start. Franak and Menno are so sexy together. I love the way the story is going and I can't wait for the next smexy chapter.

I love your stories, style and characters. They feel so real, I can almost smell them. There's something so primal and virile in your characters, even the more 'femenine' ones, that makes the reading sinfully delicious, a total guilty pleasure. Hahaha, I still shudder (and blush furiosly) thinking of Big Poppa... And I love you all the more 'cause you're updating really fast!.

OMG, Frankie's a virgin???? Who would have thought???? hahahah

And I definitely did not see Menno as a top! Great chapter! lol