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oooh!! I love this story!! especially this last couple!!
please update soon! I can't wait for it. looking forward to it already!!! : )

Awesome! I would love to see a picture of Mihangel if you ever feel inspired. He sounds absolutely gorgeous. I guess the cute poutiness runs in Menno's side of the family. Mihangel is also very sensitive it seems. I love Norm's down to earth attitude. Mihangel already seems to be very interested in him. I think they will match up very nicely. Frank is going to be very surprised.

Fuck. I almost fell off my stool! Apparently Norm is pretty sharp! And OMG, does he have his own secret to tell? Altho he says he's never been in the closet, he seems to connect really well with Mihangel (did I spell it right?). I mean, usually straight guys don't think of other guys as "way too handsome", right?

I can't wait to read about the pizza and beer day! lol And boy, I think Frank's gonna be really shocked!

YAY! Norm finds love! Damn it, woman! WHY do you make bears so damn sweet and loveable? I've been reading ALL of your fictions and they make feel the warm fuzzies with nosebleeds on the side! XD

Wow, I'm so proud of his boss; being so kind and understanding. He's lucky that his boss was so nice about it. Not that his boss shouldn't be nice about it, but you know how people are. That's what Frank was worried about; people's intolerances. He should feel a little more relieved that his boss doesn't care if he's gay or not.

HaHa! Frankie was caught red handed by the boss. So funny. I am glad that the boss turned out to be such a nice guy. Frank must be learning that most people will be just fine with his coming out. At least his true friends will be. I had to laugh at the way Menno fixated on the idea of Frank getting a wife. I think they do make a lovely couple. Frank is still getting used to the idea of being openly gay so he might not be ready for that trip down the aisle as yet. Menno should not feel so insecure because coming out at work is one step closer to coming out to Frank's family. I love Frank's boss. He is pretty observant. Maybe his wife has been putting ideas into his head. Thanks for the new chapter Laevi. Excellent writing as usual.

Oh my gosh! So many noises coming from Menno's apartment. The neighbors must be wondering what is going on (and wishing they could take a peek). Menno is the best! He knew exactly how to take care of Frank while he was feeling vulnerable. I just hope poor Frank will be able to walk around at work the next day. Awesome chapter. I am looking forward to the picnic.

Oh my gosh. Frank was very brave to come out to his straight friends. I am very impressed with Norm. I am wondering what this "idea of his own" might be. Could it be that Norm was upset because he has his own secret too. Very interesting. I am looking forward to the barbeque. I can't wait to see how everyone reacts to Menno. Thanks for the awesome new chapter ♥

OMG, this chapter made me cry! So sweet! Norm is such a sweetie, to be so understanding; to apologize for not reading the signs earlier. He is a true friend. I am so proud of Frank for coming out to them; I can't imagine how hard that must have been; telling your friends who you really are - afraid of their reactions. I know Menno will be just as proud; and now he gets to meet them also! What a great chapter!

I just wanted to point out a couple of errors: at the beginning of the chapter, Frank is thinking about how he goes about his life, work, relax, work out, etc. You wrote At Monday, At Tuesday, etc. It should be On Monday, On Tuesday. Also, the last part of the chapter, where Norm is telling everyone what to bring to the BBQ, desert is dessert. Anyway, no big deal, I just thought if you were going back to edit or something, I know a lot of authors go back and edit the chapters. You may want to change that.

Anyway...I can't wait for the next chapter!

I really liked this story. I think it is well written, I love the romance, I love leaving a story with a stupid grin on my face, which this story succeed in doing.