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by CrimsonRosesandBlackDahlias

person fantome1
schedule September 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant. MOAR.
person Rosie
schedule May 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit that in a couple of places you did seem to repeat yourself, but that was probably just because of nerves. I did like this story, it was pretty good and I would love you read a more drawn out storyline if you intend to make one. Don't be so hard on yourself, it was awesome!
person daveb
schedule February 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Personally, I thought it was great and would love to read a sequel. 5 stars,