rate_review Reviews

Very nice two chapters. Poor Dr. Jack has his work cut out for him. I wonder what caused poor Billy to develop so many personalities. How will Jack be able to help them. I also wonder if it is possible to get them to go away. I am very interested to see the rest of this story.q

this is really interesting. Do they only switch when something big happens or does it happen randomly and how long do they stay switched? I can't wait to see how thing unfold.

I really like this story also! I just finished your high school story, which is GREAT!

This is a bit different; it's interesting how you're incorporating both personalities in this person. Luckily for me, I used to watch One Life to Live when Vicky when through all her alters, so I know about DID! Altho, I think on the soap, the alters knew about each other.

This story is very thorough; you have great dialogue with both characters and Dr. Jack. It is a shame that that kiss triggered Danny to come out; I really liked Billy!

I can't wait to read the next chapter! Great job! You are an extremely talented writer! It's a pleasure to read your stories.

i love this, its really good and ive never read anything similer to it before. id love to see where you go with this xx

This is really good. I can't wait to read some more.