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April 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done, you were able to flesh out Kalian's character pretty well in this short piece. I just wish I could have learned more about Tomas.
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December 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I would like to know when exactly you plan on continuing this, if you ever do. It's such a good story. And it's legible! I think you should continue it. I really like how this is going. It sounds awesome. I checked out you're page, and it said this was you're only original. OMG! Update! Please!
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February 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I would very much like to read more of this. It's such an intriguing idea, and I absolutely loved what I read. I do hope you continue the story soon.
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February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is an absolout wonderfull story!!!! I really like it although it is really sad!!!! I hope you post the other storys from this world too!!! I really would love if the two meet again!!! I hope to see you soon!!!
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February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is very good. You seriously need to write the continuation.
I saw a few typos but nothing major.
I saw a few typos but nothing major.
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February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a fantastic story. I am dying to read more of this. It is so tragic. I feel sorry for Kanta because he was spoiled and stupid but I also see that he was really longing to be with his father and a part of his father's life. I am glad that Kalian did the honorable thing of taking responsibility for the killing. I am sure his path will be difficult from now on as a banished Naga. Such a sad beginning but I really cant wait to read more.