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for The Hazards of Love

by cukid9

schedule December 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol i was just (re)reading this fic and could not stop smiling, gosh i wish this wasn't a one-shot -maybe add a chapter for next valentines day? no? *sigh* just wishful thinking! are the Gods talking at the end Aphrodite & Apollo? (I'm guessing Apollo, because of the whole "...only amusing to you because of what happened with Daphne." comment and nothings more embarrassing/ego bashing than knowing the person you long for would rather turn into a tree then be with you.)
person blessed_witha_curse
schedule December 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love this. Completely. It's a wonderfully cute piece and you gave enough personality to the characters for the readers to relate to them. And I sorta got a little too attached. Maybe this Valentine's Day you could continue this story a little? See if maybe Enid feels the same way for Lover Boy without him stabbing her ruthlessly with his love drug. Again, wonderful oneshot!
BWC
person Child of the Darkened moon
schedule February 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm actually a little disappointed with the lack of resolution but it is extremely well written. I would definitely read other works by you.
schedule February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great piece for valentines day. i love how he's confused and can't find her soulmate because it's him. i also loved apollo and aphrodite (am i right?) talking about it all. it reminded me of the angels talking during It's a Wonderful Life. any updates on your other stories?