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for Gathering the Falling Stars

by MysticWitchRini

person Babisko
schedule June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You know, I had a feeling that Junko was going to have to talk in court. And, you know, about my last review? I'd send you a link about where I found it out, but you'd have to get through other things to find it, and I don't want to scar you for life. /shivers/
person Babisko
schedule June 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ew, that's disgusting. The whole chopped off penis thing. But I almost positive it was Sandra, am I right? Cause I've heard a story about that happening once. This guy cheated on his girlfriend (or wife, don't remember which) and so when he feel asleep, she cut it off, and flushed it down the toilet. The police found it in the pipes. There was also another one, I think, where the woman cheated on just tossed it out the window. I gross myself out with some of the things I know. Believe me, that isn't even the tip of the iceburg.
person Babisko
schedule June 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have a feeling something's about to happen, you know? oh well, at least Hoshi and Junko are still together. Yays.
person Babisko
schedule June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! :D

Also, I have a question. What happened to Junko's old house? I thought they were going to keep it, maybe for Youji and Jacklon to live in later on in life?
person Babisko
schedule June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YES! Now we're getting somewhere.

You know I had a dream about your story last night. It was weird. In it, Junko actually had a rich distant family, and he and Hoshi went there, and Hoshi was a catman for some reason and could read minds. Then Hoshi sees Junko's distant cousins about them and is attracted to them. Then something about Junko tripping over a barbell on the floor. And then they're meeting Hoshi's family and Junko starts thinking sexual thoughts about a few of them and Hoshi gets all pissy and stomps out, despite the fact that he'd done the same earlier. After Hoshi leaves, you come out with two new chapters title Pedophilia, and I start writing a review like NO! Not Hoshi!, and then I wake up because my face is itching because of the blanket.

Just thought I'd share.

Also, how old is the principal? If you've said, then I must have missed it, which is why I'm kind of considerly creeped out about the last few chapters, considering I've been thinking she's a 50-60 year old woman. Please says she's not.
person Babisko
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Definetly not feeling sorry for her anymore. Poor boy. Gonna get them back together again, soon, right? And get rid of Miyuki (?) totally and completely? Oh, also, you might want to add the extra warning in your story about the hetero sex thing. Just a M/F tag.
person Babisko
schedule May 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That's kind of creepy. The whole thing with the principal, though i might end up feeling sorry for her when Junko and Hoshi get back together. >:|

Oh, and what I mean at the end of the review, is about the chaptchas, when i'm writing reviews. I don't know if it will make me redo my review if I mess up, so I really don't want to, and I can't really tell if it's an I or an L, and i'm a bit tiffed already at the fact that half the time I lose my review anyway because I'm a tard, which means I'm a tard and on a laptop. Not a good combination, especially when my hand presses on it on accident and the mouse decides to click whatever it's on, which is usually a button leading me AWAY from the review.

Well, now that I'm done ranting about the hell of captchas...
person Babisko
schedule May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
No!

You're going to make them get back together, right? Right?

Stupid Captchas. I hate when I can't understand what the freak it is.
person Babisko
schedule May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Don't... do it...

Please? No?

Thats just not right.

:(
person Rapunzelle
schedule May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Bless Hoshi isgoing to ask Junko to marry him. Loved this chapter and cannot wait for the next
:-)