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June 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I read this story a few months ago, and I've been trying to find. I was so happy to find it again. I've been waiting to read it again for awhile. I hope you keep writing cuz I enjoy your stories.
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December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I found this fic and two days latter I have come to the end. I think this is done very well. I likeed it and cant wait to see more.Thanks for sharing.
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June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i loved your story!! i just got done reading it and fell in love with your characters. i did want to know more about the twins though. i loved the last chapter. have you considered doing a story on them? i would love to read it and find out who that tattoo is for. :D just a thought.
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June 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol thank you so much for not sending the brothers to prison I think I really would have cryed if that happened. I really liked the last chapter having the introduction of Junko and Hoshis child leaves you with alot opitions if you ever decide to do a sequel side story. Ill keep on eye out for any additional stories you write. Thanks for sharing the story with us.
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June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sorry it took me so late to review. You know, I was thinking you were going to leave the kid being born in the sequel. Now I have no idea what you're planning with it. Also, that whole deal with Hoshi having to explain what jacking off meant? It made me think of this funny video on America's Funniest Home Videos, where the little girl wanted a penis, and the dad was trying to explain why only boys had them. Then when she finally excepted it, she ended it with 'can we go to disney land?'
Anyway, I'll be waiting to see what that sequel is about ;)
Anyway, I'll be waiting to see what that sequel is about ;)
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June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Guh! And here I was, not assuming anything. Did you say there was going to be a sequel, after this? Please don't tell me she's going to try and come back, is she?
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June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Huh, I had a suspicion it might be her, but then a blew it off. But then again, there's such a thing as a plot twist, so I'm not assuming. This time.
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June 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Finally! :D
I don't know, i've always been assuming it's a woman. I mean, it seems like a woman would do. Urg, I hate Ryan so much.
I don't know, i've always been assuming it's a woman. I mean, it seems like a woman would do. Urg, I hate Ryan so much.
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June 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOL omg I sooo was not expecting that. pregnant!!!! that is such a wickedly awsum twist!!!!! There is no way that the rothers can go to jail now that would just be so unfair.Please update soon I always check back to see the notice of a new posting.Cant wait for the next chapter
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June 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Dang, would have thought Sandra would have tried to pin it on them. But I'm thinking she might not have done it. Maybe another, certain, woman in their lives?