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December 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow i take it you read to original version of Cinderella? Though in the original the evil-stepsisters cut parts of their ankles and toes to fit the shoe only to be taken back as each time the messenger noticed blood trailing behind them. Well reinvented though. Btw i visited your homepage after i read Trafficking in Pleasure and i have to say your little japanese wind chime thing scared to crap out of me. I didn't notice it and i seriously thought it was my roommate at first, except she wasn't in so then i deliriously though it was a ghost. It wasn't until like 20 secs of staying absolutely still did i notice it on the corner of my screen. I thought i was gonna die.
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March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was really cute. I liked little cute things you added, like the aligator and that you made the prince's mother Orora (The Sleeping Beauty), or so I concluded. The gaurds were nice fellow as well.
A good retelling!
A good retelling!
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February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Om my god, I sooo love this story! It's incredibly well written and I just adore the fairy godperson and of course "Doodlerella"! XDD
“I have a magic wand that can do wonderful things.” -> Man, that line literally brought tears to my eyes! Isn't that the standard-sentence of EVERY male?! LOL!!! XD IDK, was this intended or did it just came out this funny?
But seriously, your writing skills are very good! The story is funny and flows smoothly and I like the way you picked up the original path with cutting off the legs of the sisters (I know, slightly changed, but hush! ;-)), though you must have taken the fairy from Disney, because I think I remember something about three balls and birds and dresses hanging in trees...
But anyway, I enjoyed it very much and I hope to see more like this from you soon! ^-^
“I have a magic wand that can do wonderful things.” -> Man, that line literally brought tears to my eyes! Isn't that the standard-sentence of EVERY male?! LOL!!! XD IDK, was this intended or did it just came out this funny?
But seriously, your writing skills are very good! The story is funny and flows smoothly and I like the way you picked up the original path with cutting off the legs of the sisters (I know, slightly changed, but hush! ;-)), though you must have taken the fairy from Disney, because I think I remember something about three balls and birds and dresses hanging in trees...
But anyway, I enjoyed it very much and I hope to see more like this from you soon! ^-^
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January 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"Stick to the script" LOL :D
Good take of the Cinderella story, I especially like the name Doodlerella. But the cutting off of the stepsisters legs was a bit morbid. But you have to love the fairy godmot-fath-person, great character.
Good take of the Cinderella story, I especially like the name Doodlerella. But the cutting off of the stepsisters legs was a bit morbid. But you have to love the fairy godmot-fath-person, great character.
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January 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG, what a CUTE story! I love the fairy godmother, godfather, godperson! Such a funny guy!!!
But, omg, those parents are fucking sick, sick, sick! I had a nasty feeling when I read about the axe! They chopped off their daughter's bottom half of their legs????? Just so they would be shorter??????????? Now that's fucked up!
Are you going to continue? It's a great story! Highly amusing!
But, omg, those parents are fucking sick, sick, sick! I had a nasty feeling when I read about the axe! They chopped off their daughter's bottom half of their legs????? Just so they would be shorter??????????? Now that's fucked up!
Are you going to continue? It's a great story! Highly amusing!