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"Soon enough, Kazuya wouldn’t like anyone touching him."

oooooouhhh shiiiiiiiittt... what's gonna happen!!!???
Is Kazuya gonna get raped?! this very awful feeling has been nagging at me for some time.
Kazuya, probably his bad luck, and the first client he gets turned out to be some no-good bastard who rapes him...
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

or what or what?
The owner agrees to 'train' Kazuya? then, once Kazuya knows his touch, he won't want anyone elses....

GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!

oh and I'm sorry for only finding your update now~~~ was terribly busy x_x

I shall rush off to read the next chapter now ;) *hugs*


- nekoii

shopping. wow... would an owner so casually take a host-in-training out shopping just because someone else couldn't do it?
it's stepping beyond the call of duty...
it's doing a favour... its... GOING ON A DATE! XD

then that scene... owner, host, trainer, host-in-training... they make a nice combo together eh? XD
hehehehehe, interesting situation. "what is this?" "training" XDDD

and .... hwaaaaaaahh!!! Takumi... number 1 on the seme side... and he has an older lover!!! Waaaaaaaahh!!! omg!!! *squeals*
What does that mean??? I'm just wondering, about the positions.... Takumi is on the seme side... but...
Sugimoto-san is, a minister... and well, from the way Takumi was behaving... I'd say he was the slighter and more emotionally fragile one of the pair of forbidden lovers.
*sighs* why can't they be together!!!????

and then. what is in that box????? will we get to know!!! and somehow. i get the feeling Bakusui is caught in the middle of Takumi, Sugimoto and Chitose! what's the secret in their relationships?
*A* wah wah.

secret are teasing the scene... and we don't know what it is!!!
anticipation! whoots! the story is just building up~

I hope more people will read this *A*

but hey, just wondering.... with Opiate being as it is... I'm wondering, when will we see you write a smut scene?
Like Kazuya's final step in the training... I hope you write that down.... in detail.... gah! *blushes*

bye!!! *runs away*

- nekoii

You know..this story reminds me a lot of the Love Mode manga. Especially Gen and his patron, sounds a lot like Rin and his model/patron boyfriend.

Do some Japanese really have Blue eyes and real blond hair or is it Just a Yaoi Fantasy????

J... Jay...
Juka? Juka sounds cute and cool... XD hehehe~

Is Kazuya NUTS?!
It is obviously SERIOUSLY out of line for a mere bell-boy to jump out at a 'supposedly client' and GROPE HIS CHEST?!
Konbayoshi is definitely not far behind. and Kazuya is not far from dead. What with failing the final module of his training just last night, then jumping on a guest just the next afternoon. aaaah. *Shakes head*
and does Opiate know that Kazuya has 'rape issues'? It's reasonable that he'd have problems with that 'final module' if he's been raped before... Someone go tell Bakusui that please~ as Kazuya's trainer, he at least, should know.

But other than that... Yay Chitose~! Number one uke is back in the house! Gen should be getting grumpier eh, level four hurricane. XD
All hell is breaking loose! Or maybe, more excitement is about to happen. Whoots! Can't wait ^_^


Okay anyway,
Yay for the bio! At least chapter 6 can now be used as reference and as a memory refresher should a name that sounds familiar pops up =D

The interludes are meaningful, and I can see how they will play a huge part in us, the readers, understanding of the whole story.

And it doesn't matter if you can't reply right away *patpat* my e-mail is on my profile. As long as we get each other's replies, it's good yeah?

You live in vancouver. It hits me again. I just realised that I now know (know, somewhat know) 2 online authors who hail from vancouver... O_O cool~ small world it is.

Ahhh. okay...
You're updating quite often, it feels like it. (More often than I do at least *ducks rotten tomatoes*) So See yaa sooon in a next chappie! ^_^

- nekoii

Review for heaven far away, chap 5 (I deleted the previous one and am replacing it with this because the format came out weird o_O")


so... Jukstapositioned (that's a mouthful XD)

Kazuya was forced into sexual acts when he was living in the streets o_O wow. that leaves alot more to be told, Kazuya's past in particular.
But well, the story is still young, there is still alot more to look forward to ;)

Also, I'm still trying to get a hang of everyone's names.
Like Gen, Shuzo and Ren... I still have to frown and think hard to recall when they were mentioned before...
KaZuya, Bakusui, Konbayoshi those at least have been nailed down XD

But at least. the name of the current number one has been disclosed...
Chitose

hehehheeheh

*whispers* CHITOSE

hehehhe XD *breaks into a fit of giggles* gah!

But hmmmhmmm.
Gen and Shuzo really do make a cute, interesting pair.
When I first read about them, what with Gen throwing stuff at Shuzo... I honestly thought that would be the last tiem Shuzo ever went to that host.
The fact that Gen was Shuzo'a exclusive didn't really sink in then. XD
But heh... somehow, I hope their relationship will develop into one whereby they can show their love and care in a more, less-violent, way. =D
Chikamasa Gen (Emerald Green, really?)...
*frowns* has his appearance been descrbed? Somehow, I can't picture him clearly in my head.
Or perhaps, this was you way of dealing the characters, not stating specific eye or hair colour and styles? (I can't remmember. oh god... curse my memory)


Side tracking... I can imagine how the olympics would be distracting XD


But anyway...
I look forward to reading about how you'd express all those different types of love.
Love is, a very facinating subject, isn't it? ^____^

Till later ;)


- nekoii

*sighs* and the reviews are still on one page... as in, it's below 10...
*shakes head* I don't understand... or maybe I'm the one who's odd o_O"

ahh well. hope you get more review hits as time goes by ;)

AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!! *sobs* I'm so sad... GAH!!!! I accidentally clicked another thing, and the page shifted, and MY WHOLE REVIEW... disappeared. And I was done typing the whole thing out too!!!
ARGH!

okay. nevermind. I'll type it again. (from what i recall) huff...

Haruno sure is a peculiar person. A constant character to this story? And why is she named Ito as well? An alias name? Interesting fellow she is, to be able to talk with Konbayoshi like that, and figure Kazuya out so quickly. Unlike said owner himself, still so dense. God... How can he be so dense?! Even after Kazuya TOLD him 'there's someone im in love with now' smthing like that... like gah! so dense! how can he be the owner of such a club? XD
Or maybe he's just preoccupied with thoughts on his mysterious lover, whom he does not know if he loves or not...
Huh... So, will it be the No. 1 uke in Opiate? or the blond girl from the photograph?
2 possible candidates! Will there be more D= I hope not.

I hope Kazuya's chances will get better...
Speaking of Kazuya, you said he's no longer virgin, that someone forced him before? D= who is that? was it part of training? Does the hosts in Opiate have double standing (like are there those who play seme and uke roles. Or is everyone set as Seme or Uke only?)
I hope there'll be more info on the club itself later on =D

And it also makes me wonder, because in the beginning there was more talk on Opiate the club. But now its more like, Kazuya and Konbayoshi. Which will be the main of the story?
The activities going on in the club (probably meaning more smut chapters XD )
or the relationship between said host-in-training and the owner (meaning more angst? XD)

As for which character I'd like to see more... hmmm. Can't really tell. It's still quite early on. How about, giving the characters that only appeared once or for awhile, a bit more show time? Then we get to know the existing characters better ^__^
and Bakusui, how exactly does he train Kazuya, I'm really interested in that.
was he the one that took Kazuya's virginity away, as part of training? Hosts arn't allowed to be virgins? It's a waste huh? I thought virgin's would fetch a better price. Pity pity. Regardless, the way Kazuya behaves around Konbayoshi is very, virgin like XD So cute!


btw, do you live in Vancouver? The winter olympics is the only thing going on now... Or the Beijing olympics is long long over. London olympics is in 2012 so long time still... Youth Olympics is later in 2010 in Singapore.
So you either live in Vancouver, or Singapore.
Right? ^____^ That'd be cool, if you lived in either Vancouver or Singapore. Because I currently live in either one of those two countries too hehehehe~

Catch ya laters! ^___^

HEllo!!! I'm a new reader.
It's so nice to meet a writer with a story like this.

This club concept is very catchy. And with a new host in training as the main, what else could I ask for?
By the way... is Kazuya still a virgin?
The 1st chapter, in the italics, that part was a bit... confusing?
Hmmmm~~~ And bakusui is purely there as a trainer only?
Hmmmmmmm wow interesting...

and the number 1 uke spot... Somehow, why do I have the feeling that, that is the person Owner-sama was talkign to, or about on that phonecall?

Well~
and there's the promise to think about! whoots! I wonder what the present will be, for Kazuya~

Please update! * A *

Why does this story only have 3 reviews?!
And 400 over hits?!

*sighs* I can understand how you feel, a similar thing is happening for my stories. XD

I shall leave you three reviews ^ _ ^, as I've read 3 chapters.

Hope you get motivated to update!