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Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Shit that was not what I was expecting, I thought Chitose was saving the kid for the boss, but now I am detecting plot ghosts from the story's far past. Beautiful Chitose is even more of infamous fem-fatal than I first dared guess. Please don't give up on this story, for surely there is a lot more of the story still to tell. The Boss should get his act together and his balls strengten out, and tell the kid how he feels, or the unhappy insecure kid will flee back to his familiar streets, because he doesn't think he good enough, while the truth is he is too good. Juksy your totally surprised fan!
Cal the Gslinger

I can see where Kazuya is coming from.
"Better to not confess, at least, I can be sure that I can stay in owner-sama's presence for ever and ever and ever~~~" something like that eh~

AAaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh....
well....

at least...
I have to say...

that...

I'm glad someone is taking some initiative in their relationship ~ ^__________________^

Goooooo Konbayoshi~!!! Awright man!!! you grew some brains!!! it's a small, stupid step (seeing as you were stupid enough to pretend to be talking to someone on that phone. Thank your lucky stars it didn't RING while you were pretending to be talking to an invisible someone...), to improve this odd non-existence relationship with Kazuya. But at least. ITS SOMETHING! 8D
Everyone, please, give your Owner of Opiate, some claps. Save the standing ovation for later. ;)

I see that glimmer of hope! I see that silver lining in the dark clouds! I see the sun rising! I see that rainbow after the storm!

just a glimmer thou... and I hope that glimmer grows~

Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! I am anticipating the following chapters VERY MUCH INDEED!!! *shakes Juka in a strangle-hug* KYAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!

My fan-girling heart feels very alive again. *breathes* aaaah, thank you~ thank you very much~~~~ *bows*


- nekoii

Clever Chitose, figuring out the boss motivation. That the Man found a pretend way for his favorite student to be, put on a delay status as a host. For some reason I can wait for Chitose to meet up with...the Kid, it could be hot, if Chitose endeavors to seduce the kid in order makes the boss jealous and reveal his affection for the boy, Oh please Juksy I beg you, please let me see Chitose in sexy action.... cold water poored over my head might make a necessary cure. But being the sicko I am I would enjoy it... Boy Love Rules!!!

Heard your tired from overwork take Catnaps and vitamins, when ever you can sneak them in... hope you feel better! Wouldn't want our favor writer to get sick and fall behind on our favorite story, now would we LOL Evil Cal the Gslinger

.......... Wah..... *grapples for words* .......Wah

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh~~~~~!!!

This is what you call, a DEEP, EMOTION-centered, chapter just for Kazuya and Konbayoshi~!
I can understand why you took longer than usual for this!!! *glomps* with this much emotion in it! of cause it will take longer!

and... and yet again... THESE TWO ARE IDIOTS!!! OMG!!! IDIOTS!!!
somehow, i hope someone would just push either one of them and they'd end up 'accidentally' kissing~!
Both idiots!

IDIOTS!
both thinking the other wont want them. both thinking the other just did what they had to do.
Both knows they like the other more than they should! Even Konbayoshi has come to a realization of sorts! and that's something!

But now, him owner, and Kazuya, are so muddled up!
Konbayoshi run's out of bed, wanting to reassure himself or Chitose which ever it is, running back to the past. Him and Chitose have to move on if he's ever going to make room for Kazuya in his life! And all this 'treats Chitose with such high regard' is really getting to me, why does Owner view Chitose as such! What's so important about that, that enigmatic blondie?! When are you gonna reveal their interlude? such anticipation!!!

Then Kazuya! Kazuya! stupid innocent gullible kazuya! Of cause he feels inferior! what with all he's seen. He probably thinks Chitose and Owner are a set item. and Owner was only doing him a favour. So now, especially what he said/thinks at the end of this chapter... it's as thou, "I've lived my dream... so now, I shall throw my body into work" AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!! *grips at hair*
Kazuya!!!! can you really?! can you really let other men touch you like that?!?!?!

somehow, REN's plan didn't work much! well, at least Kazuya lived his dream... but still... *sighs*

Oh god!

This was sooooo emotional! and I wonder. i wonder. what will Chitose do... for now, he's hiding the fact that he knows. why... what does he have hidden up those long kimono sleeves... i wonder i wonder...

okay! Till later Juka! I better go do what I'm supposed to be doing before i loose my head frettign over what will happen in this story! Graaaaaahh!! @____@~!!!!

- nekoii

Damn I want more now, I am such piggy, yet I don't want your story to be over either!

Darn work... it always intrudes one way or another on writing. Working too hard it interferes, looking for work distracts you, because its a full time job, worring about getting a job distracts you! I think I was ment to be rich, but I suppose then I wouldn't write, because I spend all my time spending my money.

I decided you should make it a threesome/family Chitose[Mom], the boss [DAD], and the naughty Kid, sorry couldn't help myself, just an idea. You could go the way of the Star WArs' force, and do a back story on Chitose... I would love to know what makes him tick? Hope Chitose isn't going take his evil revenge out on the kid, unless its in his bed. Cal the Gslinger, I am badass.. for trying influence you don't listen to me, what do I know? Apparently not spelling and grammar LOL

Something tells me the "Chitose" has hit the fan, hopefully the Boss wont be mad at the Kid for Ren's so called gift. What Chitose reaction will be I dare not guess, it seems like they had a romantic evening planned to celabrate his birthday, but was it really, if not, why the fem-fatal tears... ah mysteries when-in mysteries... and so you force us to wait to the next installment Grrrrrrrrr damn, I can't wait! Juky you tease! G... I am impatient!

PS Hang in there Kiddo, the job thing is a pain in the ass, I have spent hours and hours filling in apps on the internet for part time work and then I hear from no one, it positively disgusting!

And I know I've never told you... That I loved you (coz I didn't know I loved you)... But it's all too late~~~~ (coz, yeah, we're rutting already)
Coz now we're stuck in here for hours... twelve hours... and its so damn late (yeah. we're only getting out near noon)...
Now you know (owner, now you know)... (the door) It's not broken... (gotcha ;) )....

huh. LOL~ 8D that was actually some lyrics of a song which I editted a little so it fits this chapter.

I don't know juka. You've got my head reeeeeeeeeeeeling, then spinnin, then, i think now... It's lost underwater somewhere...

Add an alcoholic aphrodisiac beverage, with a young, freshly-'graduated' minor, in a room with many interesting toys...
How can you stop him from wanting to play. naughty naughty. Ren. I give it to you.
you win hands down. I think you are now hereby the most ingenious one in the club... but please take note, that you only are in this standing post because everyone else who is capable of outsmarting you is currently too preoccupied with their own thoughts and complicated love-lives.

But still.... Ren.... I believe everyone who was rooting for the two "K"s to get it on, has to bow down to ya... *bows... but only 75 degrees*

Okay... okay... I don't think I want to go on about
OHGOSHTHATWASHOTORWHAT!FINALLYSMUT!BLAHBLAHBLAHHOT!BLAHBLAHBLAHSEXY!BLAAAAAHTHEYDIDIT!
...
so instead. I'd like to say. that the circumstance in which my 'dream came true', was very odd.
I was secretly hoping, that it would be owner who gives Kazuya his 'initiation' lesson... but... not in this way o_O but... it fits you know... so... yeah....
And then, I was also secretly hoping that when they do get it on it would be... soft... sweet... romantic... but... it was.. hot hard and fast.... but still, it fits... you know...
So... despite me going "WHOA IT HAPPENED LIKE THAT? WHOAAA O_O well WHOA!!! *smirks* still awesome" I still.... liked it.
heheeeee~

but okay pause stop. enough ranting.

CHITOSE.

you see. the poor dear (medusa in disguise) has been stood up. for the first time. in god knows how many years.
add Ren's conversation to the mix. and the melting icing plus Chitose close to tears...
Chitose chitose... are those tears of... sadness? jealousy? anger? frustration? self pity? self ridicule? It could have been anything... but somehow... I do not think sadness is it...

I think Chitose is finally realizing that he has competition for Konbayoshi's attention. and thou deep inside, he accepts this - supports this even, he... doesn't want to have to accept it, this soon. OR maybe, thou he thinks that perhaps Konbayoshi should indulge in his 'fetish' for Kazuya, he didn't realise that he would... miss the big guy?

Urrrghhhh. what am I rambling about.... blah blaah anyway those are just my... thoughts.... you write your own plan yeah ;)
while I happily assume till you begin dropping the bombs. XD
HAHAHHA XD

okay~

HAPPY MOTHERS DAY (if you are a mum... which I think you are not... well, happy mothers day to your mum ;) )

and Happy Mothers Day to my mum... and Mum, may you never ever find out that nekoii here indulges into yaoi. I think she'd die on the spot.


NEXT CHAPTER!!! OUT! COME OUT NOW!!!!! hahhahahhhahahhhahahah XD


- nekoii~

AAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRGGHHHHHHHHHHHHH this bloody review page is only at page 4... damnit.

Are you getting angry Juka? I don't think you are.

Nevermind. I will get angry for you.

GRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!! *throws daggers at all stalkers in sight* YOU WAIT YOU BLASTED SHADOW LOVERS! I'll GET YOU ONE DAY!!! Ya think HIT COUNTS ARE ENOUGH HUH?! HUH!?!??!?! *gets forcefully dragged away*

The last chapter was so emotional, I had to read it twice with soggy wet eyes before I could make this comment... so much feeling, ever gracefully subtley steadly building and then your slapped in the face by the horrible truth of the young boy's sudden death and the not-so-cold-hearted-whore's realization of his true loss.

Male or not... Chitose like the mother figure is he, returns despite missing his protesting lover/client to help his student/friend deal with his grief. Most excellent writing as always... hope you plan to write for living, surely your readers will certainly joyfully benefit. Cal the Gslinger

btw,

in the earlier chapter, I had confused myself about Akeno. I thought he was Shuzo (the cool model who keeps up with Gen's antics), which confused me since the person was acting like a brat and Chitose actually pushed him around XD

But yah. I understand better now. Thanks XD (Just had to refer back to the character profiles)