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My Dear author you sure have a preference for intricate relationships, Chitose has a thing for the boss, but he knows too that the boss isn't facing the facts of his feeling and letting it be know that he has a thing for the kid. Now the Kid doesn't think he has chance with the boss, because he saw the boss Kissing Chitose.

I don't envy your untangling of this situation, but I fear the Kid will decide not to fight for him, and ask for exclusive and go on the cruse with Kane, unless the boss man gets his act and his shit together real soon, and lets the boy and Chitose how he really feels.

Good luck with the ending of this story, but as alway you will have most excellent climax to this story I am sure, as always! Your fan G

At least Ren found a way to validate himself, and get rid of parents that painfully didn't love him or sadly appreciate him, if only just for himself. He fearlessly took charge of himself, even if he had to think out of box to do it. Too bad most of us lazy ones just simply coast cowardly along with life and never break from expected mold, for fear family and friends will think less of us. Sometime I think we are so afraid of loosing what we have, we don't go forward to get what we need. G

I reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaly ought to be asleep. now.

but.

Ren Ren...

He. is... Such a normal guy!
the sort that, would be easy to read, just once you got to know him, and payed attention to him.
there's not much riddles, or mysteries with him.

he's just your average sort of guy. eh~

I really wonder, on how he's gonna be "his own main character"... what with falling for Opiate's NO.1 who is practically the epitome of riddles and mysteries.
they are practically polar opposites.
Knowing Chitose. that blond braniac probably has Ren all figured out. and Ren is just dancing by the tune Chitose plays~
*sighs*

Ren... I wish you happiness... thou somehow. I don't think your happiness will be easily achieved. and it definitely will not be achieved any time soon.
you probably have to wait decades. o_O

ahh well. you're still reasonably young. you have time on your side.... for now XD
okay~ ^^

catch ya laters Juka ;3

- nekoii

this is....

!!! A DECLARATION OF WAR !!!

CHITOSE vs KAZUYA

Ding ding!!! and the match is on! let the fight begin!

Oh my gaaaaaaaawwwddd~!!! GYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH!!! ITS HAPPENING! THE CLIMAX OF THE STORY!!! (well i think its the climax) BUT GRAAAAAAAAAAAHH!!! ITS HAPPENING!!! OMG!!!!

and oh god. *slams head on steering wheel* owner! OWNER! how can you NOT be so BLATANTLY OBVIOUS!!! oh god! *slams head repeatedly* that guy is SO OBVIOUSLY LYING TO HIMSELF! how can such a huge grown man be in such huge denial...
you are the freaking owner takahiro! you can freaking change the rules if you feel like it! take Kazuya as you permanent exclusive! then he can't be a host anymore, in a sense. since he's your permanent host.
argh! why am I rambling!

gods! Kazuya just confessed to Chitose! chitose of all people! but Yessss!!!! that's a great person to confess to! an important person! your rival in love!!!! (thou I think, Chitose knows this is a fight he's gonna end up loosing. but he wants to have this fight. because he wants the person who ends up with Takahiro, to be a person, who will determinantly, and unconditionally, love Takahiro. and I think.... Chitose.... for thinking like that. or for doing that.... Chitose is awesomeness to the max. *bows to chitose* you should be called "Chitose-sama"...)
and Kazuya... kazuya... kazuya... you are such a child. (who the hell am I talking about. but I can relate to Kazuya, age closeness and all... )... such a child... and I keep thinking. did your body enjoy it while with Kain... I wonder how Kain feels having sex with someone who doesn't respond. o_o lol.

OWNER!!!! ARGH!
I was so hoping that owner would suddenly BARGE into the room and bodily drag Kain away! XD but that's just wishful thinking on my part.
Apparently, owner's balls arn't big enough. pfffffffftt... it's hard to imagine. a large dick with small balls.... such the humor XD argh. lol . im talking rubbish.

I want to drink mocha now!
I wonder how salty mocha tastes like XD

I WANT KAZUYA TO WIN!!!

I WANT OWNER TO QUICKLY WAKE UP!!! before Kain comes for second helpings D:

I WANT CHITOSE TO FIND HAPPINESS TOO!!!

I want I want I want. Juka will say "I WANT TO SMACK YOOOOUUU~~~" xD hahahhahahha!
Well, me, reader, will just say say say what ever we want. but you, writer, willl, do do do, what ever you want.
so there.

I'll seee yaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!! next chaaaaaaaapp!!! OMG!!!


*screams* THE FIGHT IS ON!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!! he said "...you will have to fight me for him".... *GASPS* OOOHHMYYGOOOODDD!!! teh DRAMA!!! *runs and screams* OOOHHH MYYY GOOOOOOODDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


- nekoii

Welcome back Juksy, great lovely Chapter as always, at last the boy confronts his true feelings... and surprisingly its to his chief competitor for the boss' affection to the infamous and mysterious Chitose.

Somehow whither #1 is his enemy or his ally, something tell's me that the beautiful a exquisite #1 wants whats best for all of them including the kid. That's not to say he wont fight back, but for the moment I think he has a certain compassion for the kid.

As always I am waiting for more, and hope your excellent nasty horny muse, overwhelms your beastly insidious writers block, often the results of a normal stressfully daily life we can't avoid, "So Forward into the breech dear author and run that block into the ground until it's all gone!"

A fan, Gslinger

Heah Juksty,

I miss your story, especially the kid, the boss, and Chitose. Still blocked? Or you just too busy with nasty work! Yo just to get back in the swing of things I think you should have a lovely horny Chitose go on amorous rampage and seduce just about everybody in your story, and then have a special drunken threesome with both the Kid and the Boss, You know you can never can go too hard core for us Fans at AFF.

Yo kiddo, hurry up we're waiting, and I miss you. A bored and overheated, Gslinger

Jukaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! I'm here I'm here! *runs and trips over her own feet*

OKAY! I don't know how in the world I managed to miss this update O_Q
What excitement I have missed! I'm glad I found it!!! YAY!!! 8D

OHMAIGOD!!! Kazuya's gonna go sleep with some other MAN! Who is this KAIN!??
But, OwO he soundes cool enough on his own. I hope he bed's Kazuya (despite the fact that I'm still rooting for owner and Kazuya)
I hope he's gooooood OwO omomomomomomooo~~~
But somehow, no matter how good or bad this Kain will be... I believe that foremost in Kazu's mind would be....

Owner owner owner owner owner owner owner owner owner owner owner owner owner owner owner owner ...

HIRO CHAAAAAAAAAAAAANN!!! WHAT ARE YA GONNA DOOOOO??? Please! Don't tell me you're just gonna stand there in your shower while (your beloved) Kazuya gets pounded into by some other MAN!!! RARARARARARRRAAAAA!!! Chitose...

I think...

He's really gonna make you...

......................... make you do what? O_O

CHITOSE's gonna DO something~~~

ouh pray tell what!!!? Chitose is tying back his sleeves, and reaching his hands into something you would so rather not he meddle with coz you know you are doomed the moment he does. (Doomed in a good way anyway :D )
I'm really looking forward to meddlesome Chitose and his scheme's... *A*
I'm looking forward to it indeed~~~

KYAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! JUKA! I hope you have some SMUT or some EXCITEMENT up ahead. but. well yeah.
NO PRESSURE HUH? seriously no pressure *piles pressure on you* seriously take it easy ;)
hhehehehhehehhehehhehehehe~~~ nope I'm not drunk. just giddy coz i got my ear-helix pierced 8D this has gotta be the wildest thing i've done besides being into yaoi.

laters! ^___________^

- nekoii

I think Kasuya better be careful... Raising this Kain, I think I smell something fuzzy in the woodwork, are all guest just allowed to walk in the club without being scrutinized, before they are aloud contact with the hosts... for I wouldn't want our sweet new host Kas to get his cute little ass busted... client Kain asked an awful lot questions for someone that was already a member.

Great as always, G

Juksy I hope your job search is doing better than mine!

I check every day to see if you have left us more story, because I am more impatient for even more.

So... finally... FINALLY!!!
We have a NAME!!!

Konbayoshi Atsushi... the infamous 'uncle' and 'former owner'

How momentous... not. he's just another one of those . COLD HEARTED. BASTARDS.
evil. vile. scum of the earth. Those sort of people, you just want to quickly dispose of them from your mind. No point in remembering shit like that.

People you want to remember... are people like Ichiaki Koki.

And so, we meet Koki...
Wow... His manner of speaking is rather similar to Chitose's. Is this some sorta number 1 style?
For the short moments we meet Koki... I think you managed to give him a uniqueness, and signature, that will leave an imprint in this entire story. For a character that was shown for such a short period of time, a character that appeared, left a mark, then passed away... This Koki, truly is something.

I'm getting all sentimental now. grah. *rubs eyes*
Maybe it's just the way i picture the movie in my head as I read your words... Maybe it's just the impact of your words, the way you play your plot, and your character... the effect is just, much...
*sighs* okay.

and you know what... all these heart attacks. it's like some 'Death Note' thing? o_O Suddenly, for all you know, talk about about apples and a raven headed candy obsessed male will infiltrate Opiate.

Then we have Chitose, and Bakusui... And the strange strange relationship they have. I do not understand your last sentence.
"In this room, where we both lost our love, ..."

Chitose lost his love in that room... Who was it?
For Bakusui, it was Koki.
But for Chitose... he, does, love... Takahiro. doesn't he... I think he does... but I think, after the years and years, his love has changed...
And Takahiro, loves Chitose too...
They are... What they were. Is rather similar to this un-spoken silent emotion Kazuya and Takahiro have for each other now...
Which makes me wonder, whom Chitose will 'get' in the end...
I don't know really. I'm just guessing... Eijiiiiii~? hehe XD


What a chapter.

This is a good dose of information.

I'm ready Juka. You can throw it all out now. I can take it. As it is, i've been knocked down flat already.

It seems like. again. I've fallen for the way you play your plot. I'm in awe~~~ Wheeeeeeeee~~~

I just hope, this said plot will eternally protect that cell phone of his. I would so so so SOOO hate it if one day, I read a chapter that goes 'Bakusui's antique cell phone breaks, dies, gets stolen, etc' I think I would smash my notebook screen. Hehe

Okay!!! Phew. What a chapter.

I'll see ya in the next!


- nekoii

I think I now know who Koki is~!!!

Koki. Is someone. Who is a host. who WAS a host. in the uke section.
and Koki. is someone, who - fell for Baku-sensei, or Baku-sensei fell for him.
And Koki definitely knew Chitose too. Koki probably was a host during the earlier times (when it was the former owner 'uncle-sama' ?)
And Koki, was 'accidentally' killed while servicing Mukai. Thus Chitose extracts revenge, in the exact same fashion...
He's one hellavula dominatory uke... Attention all Semes~! BEWARE!!! xDDDD Chitose will grind your balls. Gyahahahaha!!!
I hope to learn more about Koki. (I think I will when Baku-sensei's interlude comes around)

I wonder... how can whipping lead to a heart attack?
I thought perhaps some more drastic BDSM techniques were used. like that asphyxiation fetish. or something... electrocuting... the sort.... huh. who knows.

oh. when oh when is Hiro-chaaan going to take ANOTHER step?
Oh mai gawd. I cannot believe he just let Kazuya wait and wait for this 'imaginary' client!!!
How could ya be so heartleeeeeeess~!!!
This is like, one step forward... and a pause period... WHAT?! YOU GOT MUSCLE CRAMPS???! Che... old man.

And kazuyaaaaaaaaa!!! are you JAILBAIT or something?! I have a feeling he's gonna end up attracting one bad client after another till he finally gets raped! D=
OWNER!!! Please step in before that happens!!!
but who knows. with this duffus duo, something drastic probably NEEDS to occur to knock some sense into them.

Okay! Interesting update!!! Someone died and I'm not sad at all! xD
Chitose chitose... You are a force to be reckoned with. And somehow, I get the feeling that, Kazuya is going to be the one who would do something to Chitose that he would never have expected........................
Hm. Just a feeling.

Till later! More and more secrets are being revealed! I love this setting! I love this! *jumps for joy*


- nekoii