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........... Uwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Just one core interlude... and you've stolen my breath away...

I'm at a lost of words... *sighs* oh my god~ what a chapter... What a chapter indeed...
an entire life's story poured down onto this single page (well, chapter, but heck)...

I've been subdued. This is-was one rollercoaster ride that has stolen the scream out of me.

I've just gotta say....

Juka... YOU ARE AWESOME !!! so bloody fantastically whoopingly something else man!

So... Soooo... UMPH!!!


~
Takahiro's life. his youth.
They way Chitose, and Takahiro met.
Their relationship, developing steadily, the growing emotions, too.
Their endeavors.
Their triumphs, their smiles, and their failures and heart-wrenching pain...
Then...
The blindside. And their ultimate defeat.
The revelation of the true winner... the dead haunts them forever.
Truly, an ultimate defeat.
Chitose's cold acceptance. And Takahiro's confused denial.
The relationship not unknown, the development halted, the emotions gone askew in unspoken questions.
The many many years that went on, and went by...
And the coming of a new player in this game.
Hope for Takahiro.
While Chitose awaits without holding his breath.
... the former relationship, the lingering emotions... finally, some closure?
~

Perhaps... the next interlude will tell us so. Part II Todou Chitose.

yes? no? who knows... gimme the next one and I'll know ;) hehehehehe~

Takahiro Konbayoshi...
"Do you love him?"
"Do you love him?"
"Do you love him?"

...................................................... (just who the hell is this "him" now huh? T__T""" )

till next time Juka~ *tight-hugs* :'3

- nekoii


ps: sorry double post (double review so no sorry *A* heheh)
the dang codings... dang dang...

Sorry to hear your not going do anything else with the intriging and complex Chitose. But as his creator that is your right. I still enjoy your story and will look forward to reading more of your stories whatever their subject. G

I knew that was going to happen....Am not sure I like the way it worked out...But what do I know anyway? If it was a true reality that Chitose went away with that man for 10 years, I hope, for all of his normal Sexy Chitose's sneeky cool superior attitude and manipulations , along with [ Kain's really its only business deal for sexual convenience] that they both manage to fall madly and wildly head over heals for each other anyway... and be happy inspite of themselves. To me that would be just a perfect and righteous revenge...that hot love swept away their cold-hearted independences for once. Almost Juksy, worthy of a story of its own, if I might suggest, sometime in the future. Whistful, Gslinger

“Because I am in love with someone and I cannot bear the thought of being parted from him.” KAZUYA SAID TAHT???!??!?! HE SAID THAT?!?!?! SHUT UP!!! OMG SHUT UP!!! UNBELIEVABLE!
the dear character has finally revealed that HE INDEED HAS GUTS!
and he said all that WHILE LOOKING STRAIGHT AT THE OWNER!!! hell yeah! my boy~ you have guts!

probably much better than Owner's
“Like you, I prefer to keep those I like close to me.”

Like what the heck, that was rather vague-ish. But I suppose, it fits... It's a hit. Owner more or less confessed that he likes Kazuya...

so now... Will Owner and Kazuya have more... intimate scene's... Come to think of it... Have they even kissed?! *ponders* I don't remember that... But somehow, being a mere page boy... is... rather... degrading? I don't know. it's like, a bit of a too low job for Kazuya? Is it not? But ah well...
He's still young... He's got lotsa time to learn and get a better job in Opiate. Like... Owner's personal assistant... *A* waaaaaaaaaaaaaaahh~~~ ouh all the possibilities~~~ PERSONAL ASSISTANT!!! It's a WHOLE NEW STORY!!!

argh argh. shan't venture my brain into there`~~~ 8D

anyway, as always... You gotta love Chitose... *sends love to Chitose* love you, you blond bugger. You you... Epitome of an elite Geisha... Really. I've been thinking for sometime that Chitose's style and mannerism and professionalism is sooo Geisha like. Anyway... I hope this exclusive is for the better Chitose. You get to travel the world. And the ship is as good as your's.. I can so see everyone just falling over themselves to please you. XD
May you find happiness! In some form or other~

Okay Juka~ I'll see you again... in the next chapter... Just how many times more am I gonna get to say this eh~ 'next chapter' thing~ .... THE END IS NEAR!!! *aghast*

Laters!

- nekoii

Oh heavens... this has blown totally out of proportion!

Kain blowing up at the rejection definitely was NOT in my calculations. And I thought a more solid way of agreeing on the exclusive should have been made (instead of a simple 'yes' over the phone) before the exclusive can be finalized and confirmed. Yeah?

So I thought, that would give the owner some time (for his slow idiotic brain) to cook up some lie/excuse that, "Kazuya's first night bidder does not want him on exclusive just yet" or something like that! ARGH!!!

and Chitose. chitose... why are you just adding fuel to the fire?! You are not helping at all, with what you just said!
Those words, are going to push Owner over the edge... and I wonder. Will owner fall, or will he soar back up and rise above the rest.

after all... he is... The Owner of Opiate...

*sighs* Kazuya... you sure have brought yourself into this undignified mess. Who asked you to decide so quickly!? Something like a 10year exclusive at least warrants a whole week to think over! Even Kain would understand if you took more time to think it over! But once you said "yes" there's gonna be hell to pay for before you get to back out!

*SIGHS* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH man. what a mess.
Kazuya's right in the middle of it. Kazuya better GET OUT of the exclusive. it's the only way now. What with seeing Kain's reaction to being rejected... I don't believe he would be a good person to be on a ten years exclusive with. Who knows what could happen... Kazuya could die. o_O

Phew~ okay~
I hope I get to keep up with your updates (if any) in the few weeks to come. Coz I'll be rather busy with quite a few things... I hope this whole busy period settles soon ~

All the best with everything Juka! I'm waiting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter!!! Gyaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!

- nekoii X3

Yo do you enjoy torturing your readers? I want a happy ending Now! And I want Chitose to be happy too. {And not just take over the Kid's 10 year contract,in his place so he can be with that silly slow hesitating boss. Which is what I am afraid your going to do... to solve Kane's problem, he seems the cold-hearted practical bastard no matter how handsome he is, I find all the other hosts much warmer and more symathetic than him.

Princess Chitose needs true love too! Please, pretty please with sugar lumps on it.

Even when this story is over I like to read more about Chitose, a fem-fatal, male yet he has complicated substance that I think he deserves further exploration by his creator, down the road ... hell I think he'd be interesting just running his coffee shop LOL! IF I lived nearby I go visit it each day to see what he is up too and stare at him!
Your impatient impassioned fan, G
PS I think I have a crush on Chitose, silly me!

I can only hope Kane's exclusive for ten year, lights a hug fire under the reticent boss' ass. Or will Chitose let things go with the flow, to get his way...no I don't think so, #1 loves the boss enough to give him away to the kid, especially if its to see him happy in end. Unfortunately the totally Greedy Pervert in me would like to see the three together as one, so all 3 can be happy...why must there alway be just a couple. What wrong threeies. Sometimes we need to think out of the box.

A whistful, Gslinger

wah! my internet is awfully lagging lately!

anyway... im here!!! to review~!!! before i go clean my room *looks around*

...............

and..... OH MY GOD!!! my heart stopped!!! I had to re-read that sentence again and again!

“I would be honoured to accept your exclusive, Kain-san.”

WhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaattT!!!!??!?!?! WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTT?!?!??!?!?
KAZUYA WHAT?! What in the world are you thinking?!?!??!
taking on an exclusive is one thing.
taking on an exclusive for TEN FREEGING YEARS is another completely different thing!!!
*HEADWALL* oh god.....

then Chitose suddenly comes into the picture. and oh the fire... two not-so-little submissives unleashing their emotional potential!!! WHOAOAOAOAOOAOAOAOOAO!!!! fire fire fire~!

and that whole thing about Chitose being 'in love' with Kazuya is such crap and bull! omg! for us, the reader, that idea is sooooooo crap ass! xD

anyway, how can owner believe that Kazuya loves Chitose back? does he have NO inkling about KAzuya's undying love for HIM???
ah. this is one of those cliche love stories - scene, whereby the two that are in love with each other, have no idea about each other's feelings. but. EVERYBODY ELSE DOES!!! its cliche in a way, but still... still!!! I like it~ *A*

this is awesomeness to the max! *pumps fist in the air*
I haven't the faintest of what you are planning (thou I dooo have some imaginative scene's in my head xDDD), but I'm eager anyway! oh the possibilities.... OuH! *goes crazy*

I DONT WANT IT TO END YET!!!! truthfully, at this junction of the story, you can, if you want to, break it of into another arc (like a - kazuya goes on exclusive arc ) or smthing like that. but yeah. I know, you want to finish this baby! I can relate to that feeling. Because maybe you feel dragging it out might kill the 'goodness' this story has. or. whatever.

I'm loving it anyway~ ^____^

Can't wait to see what happens next! I hopes Owner just drags Kazuya into the room and does XXXXXXX and XXXXX and XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX all the unspeakable but heaven-bringing things to him~~~~!!! OwO

Besides. there's still that point about 'the mysterious bidder during Kazuya's introductory night' thing!
Gyaaaaaaaah~~~ okay~ okay~

see ya next chapp!!!

- nekoii

Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~~~

(you know actually, I should be dead now, just came out of a very busy two weeks of events, work, and other stuff. but I caught that you had updated last night. and just had to read it before heading to my pt job!!! so here, a review. i hope i conveyed my thoughts despite the rush xD )

Chitose. just kissed two men in one night. player. xD naaaaw.
i feel for him.
number one. yet not number one in anyone's heart... except for ren that is. for now. I wonder how solid and true Ren's feelings are. Maybe Chitose should give him a fighting chance.
It's sad, isn't it. having lead a hard life, practically his whole life, and yet unable to attain happiness. pure, true, happiness.
I'm really looking forward to Chitose's interlude, if there will be one, oh the secrets that will be revealed! *rubs hands*

anyway... anyway...
why oh why did Kazuya have to SEE that kiss scene! it's bad enough Owner even kissed Chitose! is he some MEGA IDIOT or what?!
he OBVIOUSLY knows he has strong feelings for Kazuya. He SHOULD KNOW that Chitose has feelings or him.
He KNOWS that he WANTS Kazuya, yet he goes and kiss Chitose?! OWNER!!! your brain is all screwed up i tell you! for some big shot you factually are, you really got no brains huh?!?!??! argh!!! *throws bricks*

If only he KNEW that Kazaya saw.... if only..... *imagines owner running after Kazuya* oh I wish T__T
and KAzuya kazuya.... after this shock. and the other shock...
I can just see his brain thinking that escaping on a ship for 10 years would solve everything...

but.... TEN freaking YEARS OF EXCLUSIVE!!!!!!!? isnt that a bit TOO much?! ridiculous!
that's as good as asking for a marriage!!! MADNESS!!! how much would that COST?!
is that idiot Kain just thinking of getting Kazuya for 10 years, coz Kazuya would be generally cheaper to buy for exclusive?
I have no idea how the money factor of the club works. but it would be nice to know some FIGURES
whoa~~~ *eyes rolls*

anyway.... as i read this chapter... it's a cold rainy day...

so befitting i tell you.

I wonder. seriously wonder.... what it would be life if Kain sealed the exclusive deal with Kazuya....

life on deck.

sex on deck...

will Kain be good and nice all throughout those 10 years?

I hope I never have to know, even thou the idea of such a plot is interesting...

but wweelll you know.... I want OWNER to finally GROW SOME BRAINS and grab what he can rightfully grab as his.
*imagines chibi owner grabbing kazuya screaming 'MINE!!!'* hehehhehehhehehehhhe~~~

Oh Chitose. I wish you happiness! with whomever!

and Owner... I wish you grew more guts, at least, since you seriously have no brains. *glares*
and Kazuya... you just ATTRACT calamities eh?
what the hell was that with Shuusei-san and Tanrin-sama. interesting man~~ side story please? XD


okay Juka! I gotta run! I hope closer to the end of this beautifully crafted story, I will be able to leave you more well-thought-off and deep reviews.

laters~

- nekoii

NOO! Not a cool cliffy! I'm on the edge of my seat w/ so many questions I must known the answer to! Can't wait for next chappy...