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for Vassnti Noamuth (Innocence Lost)

by LadyBlackhawk

schedule October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story!! I feel really bad about the twin brother, though, I'm not even going to try and spell his name. I really liked him. Did you ever intend to reveal why he wanted the elf so badly? I'll admit I was curious about that from the first mention of it. Anyway, great story, great characters.
person Nuki
schedule January 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I would love to read more. This story sounds promissing.
person Amanda88
schedule January 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I couldn't leave a review until I registered though :-(. But I hope you add a lot more chapters!