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for So It Starts

by BirthDefect

schedule December 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please transform "so it starts" to "finished at last..."

you're a fantastic writer, and i adore your image of femininety,
as well as your characters now if only you would continue writing
it i would be one happy person!

do you want me to beg is that it? well do you...? ¬.¬
schedule November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another good one.

I feel so frustrated when I come to the end of a chapter and realize that it's the last one. Nothing more to read. Only with the good ones, of course. So, I was frustrated when I came to the end of this chapter.

I found your idea of femininity interesting.
schedule September 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A great first chapter. It's caught my attention and I can't wait to read the next one. :)
person anonymous
schedule September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please update this story!!! soo good!!
person maialia
schedule September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
First of all...FINALLY!!!! YAY!!! HOORAY!!!
OK.....Awwwww...the chapter was so short! I loved it anyway!
person Amanda88
schedule August 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really love this story! When will you update?
person maialia
schedule July 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I know u probably don't want to hear or read this but, are u gonna update this story? Ever anymore? I love this story so much!
I think it's my fault in general. Whenever I leave a review for a story that I enjoyed reading it doesn't get updated anymore.....i've started to notice that.....
person maialia
schedule June 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love the naivete of the main character! I hope you continue to update this story. Seriously please! I'm dying to know who's gonna get the girl!
person Anon
schedule April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
HEY!!! I want a new chapter... I love the story... I'm dying for a new chapter... why wont you give me one...
person Sightsoblind
schedule March 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Have you ever had a stalker... Do you want to know what its like... :D Welcome to being stalked... POST MORE PLEASE!!!