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January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hot PWP. I don't think it needs more, mainly because you set a nice scene, and I'd like you to set another one-- you know, completely different.
One thing, your text implies that Hannah's cherry is set deeply inside her. I don't know if that occurs, but it would be pretty different. Usually its an incomplete ring or half-circle of tissue that is visible when you open the inner lips. A lot of women won't have one left by the time they have sex; it has kind of relaxed and stretched out, and worn away, by tampons and gymnastics and horse-back riding-- and fingers and cucumbers I suppose. Dirty girls!
One thing, your text implies that Hannah's cherry is set deeply inside her. I don't know if that occurs, but it would be pretty different. Usually its an incomplete ring or half-circle of tissue that is visible when you open the inner lips. A lot of women won't have one left by the time they have sex; it has kind of relaxed and stretched out, and worn away, by tampons and gymnastics and horse-back riding-- and fingers and cucumbers I suppose. Dirty girls!
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January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi, For a first time that was good. I would definitely like to read some more of your work. Keep posting and shoot me an email if you post anything new. I'm not sure if the site sends notices for new posts or not. Can't wait to read some more. JP