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for A World Apart

by TheMysticalOne

person kristina
schedule January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just read the first chap, and had to pause to let you know, that I really like this, and cant wait to read the rest! I love what you've done with the half/human half/animal concept, and I think its so charming when the "instincts" kick in (tho in this particular instance it wasn't for a good reason)
Keep up the good work! :-)
schedule January 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 7
Hehe, a catboy in denial. This is so cute. His dad is right: human city is full of bad influence for the kittens.
person Gwengwel
schedule January 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ho I miss 3 chappy! Sorry!
Sooo...hum...closer to the Slash?! Miam, good news!
It's always difficult to restart in a new town or a new life, I hope that Rave will keep an open mind to new thing or...play thing lollll
I can't imagin him at a top, he seems Bottom or maybe Switch/Bottom but definitely not Top. He needs someone experienced to teach him all the good thing about *coughgaysexcough*

Are you going to explain a little about their history, since they have history class? I'm curious how the scission between human and cat-man start.

Thank for the chappys
Gwengwel
person kylee123
schedule January 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So cool! Imagine having four hot cat brothers walking in to your school. I can't wait to see who the love interests will be.
schedule January 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 9

Logan, huh? This is an evil cliff; now I will be wondering what he will be like.

Very nice fantasy world; I felt so bad about Raven when the dog-men got him, but now the story turned a bit lighter and happier. It was funny when he thought: "why do they call me a "kitten", I'm 22"

All litter is named with "R" names and two of them after birds. A catboy named "Raven" is the cutest thing ever.

Some concrit: I think it should be "definitely" instead of "defiantly" in a few places.
schedule January 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I think it is important for Raven to learn to be proud of his cat heritage.It probably hurts his parents when he pretends to be human.
person Gwengwel
schedule January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fisrt, why do you just have 4 reviews?! And no vote??? A lot of bad storie had more review and they don't merite them. Not the case for your's story however.

It's interessting, well built, I like the pace (not sure if it's the good word here, sorry loll) you install. You don't jump immediatly in the romance part and it's a good plus for me. You take your time to let us discouvert who is your principal personnage and I really like it.

Rave's seems a complex personnage. I hope he find someone who can help him to accept what he is. And help be more....on the gay side mouhahaha!!!

For my part I'm not fan of incest so it's perfect if you don't go in this direction.

Gwengwel.
P.s. English,s not my mother tongue and I hope that I didn't make to much fault!!!
person kylee123
schedule January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the new chapters. It sounds like Cat Utopia. I can't wait to see the love interest - I was just being naughty. I am always pushing writers in devilish directions.
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay, the catboys are here! *cuddles Raven* I hope you get lots of reviewes here! ^__^
person js
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like the story...can't wait to read more.