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for A World Apart

by TheMysticalOne

person Maggot23
schedule February 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Raven :(
Update again soon, this is a wonderful story and I can't wait to see how it ends and if Robin's family accepts Logan into their lives.
person kristina
schedule February 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, I'm loving this story so much. Your a really great writer, and the world you've created in this story is so believable. I love me some man-kitties! lol
person kylee123
schedule February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the two new chapters. I am a little confused about what happened between Logan and Raven at the end of Chapter 20. It sounds as if Raven agreed to go out with Logan but in reality he is not too sure. He is going to be in trouble if he does not confess to Robin at least.
person Maggot23
schedule February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please update again soon. I started reading your story last night and finished it today, and it's really good.
person kylee123
schedule February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was a beautiful chapter. Beautiful kissing scene. So filled with emotion. I bet Raven was not expecting all of that from Logan. I understand both viewpoints. The attraction is definitely there but Raven has always thought of himself as straight. I don't know what he is going to say to Logan to calm him down but I hope that he is willing to give Logan a try. Awesome writing.
person Sami
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm always extra-happy when you post a new chapter. This story is really engaging.
person kylee
schedule February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
so cute. it is good to see Raven getting involved. Even if he did not intend to. He and Logan seem to have similar interests. Now they get to do more stuff together and Logan gets more chances to molest Raven.
person kylee123
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter. Raven is one confused boy. He steals Robin's clothes and then goes to the club and tells robin that he is disgusting. Then he says he does not want Robin to get hurt. I guess Raven has always been the one who wanted to fit in the most rather than being who he really is. I can tell that this story will be a real life lesson for Raven. I just hope he does not hurt Robin and Logan too much while he is learning. I am eager to see what happens next.
person kylee123
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ren was so cute in the last chapter - pestering Raven with the very questions that he wanted to avoid. Raven and Logan are hilarious together. I am going to enjoy watching Logan's courtship attempts.
person johnny101
schedule February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am luving this story.