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for A World Apart

by TheMysticalOne

person Maggot23
schedule March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter when Raven tells Logan about his family wanting to meet him.
Keep up the good work!
person kylee
schedule March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a cute family of cats! The scene with Robin was just so endearing. I love Robin. I am glad that he forgave Raven so easily. Now Raven knows that he should always show tolerance even if he does not completely understand something. Great chapters.
person Maggot23
schedule March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was hot ;)
Update again soon please, I want to see what's going to happen next now that Raven and Logan have taken the next step in their relationship.
schedule March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Logan and Raven are so cute together, and good for eachother. Wonder if anyone at home has noticed they're missing yet, and if they'll bump into the dog pack while they're in Raven's home town? Great story, definitely top of my favourites- update soon!!!
person kylee123
schedule March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! Kitty acrobatics! Very good job on their smex scene! The latest chapters are great. It is a very interesting look at how people feel when there is racism circulating. Every time you go out, you wonder if people dislike you just because of your race. I am very interested in the boy who was working at the diner. I hope the boys will be able to help him to find a place within cat society. Raven's family must be wondering where he is. Logan's family too. It seems the trip has definitely helped Raven to make up his mind about the relationship. I wonder how his family will react.
person Maggot23
schedule March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story just keeps getting better and better, and don't worry about getting out fast updates. The wait just makes the story better!
person Maggot23
schedule March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Update again soon please. This is my new favorite story. :)
person Maggot23
schedule February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter. Update again soon please :)
person kylee123
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the new chapters. Poor Raven was not ready to be outed like that before he even accepted the fact himself. I love their visit to the creek. Too bad they stopped making out. Hot catboy smex can make everything seem better. Raven and Logan do make a great couple. They seem to fit together naturally. I love how close the brothers are. I think they will come around in no time since they are probably more shocked about Raven's sudden change in opinion than anything else. I love how you are handling the story. Keep up the good work.
person Maggot23
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Update again soon please. I'm lovin' this story.