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December 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was lovely. Absolutely wonderful. I had so much fun reading this. Your story grabbed my attention and kept it. It was well written and had wonderful characters that were believable. *happy grin*
Thank you so much for sharring!
Thank you so much for sharring!
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March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've just read this story as a whole, and I have to say I love it! It's a light, easy to read fiction with a community of gay cat boys, something I've never seen before and you've pulled it off well.
The only downside is that the epilogue ruins it for me, it seems rushed and jumbled, not only in the storytelling but in the tenses too. Why is it that the oldest brother who has just graduated already an uncle 3 times over when his younger siblings should still be in school? If they're just moving their things in why have they been living there for enough time for flowers to turn old? I know these points seem like small pedantic things but it's detracted my attention from what otherwise is such a nice read.
Please don't take this comment as a bad thing, just a few tweaks here and there and it'll become something amazing. I hope to see more of your fiction around soon!
The only downside is that the epilogue ruins it for me, it seems rushed and jumbled, not only in the storytelling but in the tenses too. Why is it that the oldest brother who has just graduated already an uncle 3 times over when his younger siblings should still be in school? If they're just moving their things in why have they been living there for enough time for flowers to turn old? I know these points seem like small pedantic things but it's detracted my attention from what otherwise is such a nice read.
Please don't take this comment as a bad thing, just a few tweaks here and there and it'll become something amazing. I hope to see more of your fiction around soon!
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March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful! I'm sad to see it end, but hey all good things must come to end, right?
I will definately be checking out the merman story now.
I will definately be checking out the merman story now.
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March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So cute! You named a character after me! yay, exact spelling too.
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March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story!
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March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love double posts! Update again soon please, this story is wonderful.
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March 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sasha got a tongue lashing from Logan. She should not have been gossiping about them, but I can understand how she might be tempted to spy on them. I am glad that the dinner went well for Raven and Logan.
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March 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good for Logan! What Sasha the neighbor did was wrong.
Update again soon. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Update again soon. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Cute story! At the beginning, Raven seemed so strong but was pleasantly surprised when Logan took the more dominant role. Please continue!
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March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Update again soon please. I want to see how dinner goes when all of Raven's family is home to meet Logan.
And again, this is one of my new favorite stories. It is amazing and well written.
Keep up the good work!
And again, this is one of my new favorite stories. It is amazing and well written.
Keep up the good work!