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March 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story! I can't wait for the nexxt chapter!!
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March 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Woot! New chapter! I liked that we got to see more of the characters' personalities. and the ending was so mean, because now i have to wait for the next chpater to see how this threat will all play out :P Anyway, great job and can't wait for the next chapter! I'm glad your not giving up on it!
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March 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this today. I love the story! I did have a question tho: Jayden is supposed to be 15, right? And he skipped a few grades and is now a senior. Being 15 he would actually be a freshman, which means he skipped three grades. All of his friends (if they are also 15) should be freshman, not juniors as you pointed out in the first chapter.
Also, I noticed that you don't like periods! lol There are a lot of sentences that don't have periods at then end of them.
Anyway, I love the story and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Also, I noticed that you don't like periods! lol There are a lot of sentences that don't have periods at then end of them.
Anyway, I love the story and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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March 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter ! You haven't give up this story !! I'm happy !
Talen's jalousy is cute ^^ well not when he wants to kill someone XDD
Can't wait for the next chapter
Talen's jalousy is cute ^^ well not when he wants to kill someone XDD
Can't wait for the next chapter
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March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
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February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... Interesting. I like J's dry sense of humor, and I love the older brother's best friend/younger brother dynamic!! :]
I can't wait to read the next chapter.
I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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February 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I really like this story, I think you have alot of potential here. Hope you update soon! :-)
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February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was interesting : the backgound of the storie!
Good chapter!
Bye
M
Good chapter!
Bye
M
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February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love chapter 2. The story is different from the usual. I wonder what Talen is using to blackmail Jayden. Jayden does not realize that Talen does not hate him, he is just lusting after him. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter ! I like it so far and can't wait for more...
Oh, I wanted to ask what the title means ?
Oh, I wanted to ask what the title means ?