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May 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Bless your evil heart! Your chapters are cruelly short! Delicious story line! I love all the pent up emotions brewing around! They are together but it is far from happily ever after!!! My only peeve would be the errors with the formatting and posting! Hope you get it sorted! Bravo though! Thoroughly enjoying the story! Please please notify me when you update? wendqam@gmail.com
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December 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter. I think you did a good job with the confrontations and moving the relationship forward. Bravo!
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December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, n lurved this chapter. Loved Adams reaction, n just love the whole concept of brothers best friend n in too deep n that ( genious line by the way).
I must admit though, I had to go back a chapter to remind myself of the names of the characters; I couldn't figure out who Talen was, sorta got him confused with ethan.
Anyway loved the update, n I hope u don't give up on the story.
I must admit though, I had to go back a chapter to remind myself of the names of the characters; I couldn't figure out who Talen was, sorta got him confused with ethan.
Anyway loved the update, n I hope u don't give up on the story.
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December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Happy Holidays! Thanks for the new chapter. I think the writing turned out pretty well. I think the story is going beautifully. I think once you have the story done you will be able to go through it again and fix all the little things that you don't like. I love the way Jayden and Talen came downstairs and revealed their status as a couple the morning after the wedding. They could not have chosen a better time. They are so good together. I hope Talen will be able to stay out of trouble.
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December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, I think this chapter is great !
Perhaps Talen give in too fast or is it Jayden ? But, I like your characters ^^
Keep going, please ! And Happy Holidays !
Perhaps Talen give in too fast or is it Jayden ? But, I like your characters ^^
Keep going, please ! And Happy Holidays !
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October 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I would really like to read the next chapter of this story. I like your writing style and the characters ^^
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October 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your story is so good! :). Good character development! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please email me at L_F_O_W@yahoo.co.uk when you update this. This i s a really good story and I can't wait to see what happens next.
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July 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love this story, can't wait to read the next chapter
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July 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved the latest chapter. Double smex scenes! yay! Poor Jayden is really struggling with his feelings. He tried to let go of Talen and instead realized that he wants whatever he can get of the sexy bastard. I wonder how Talen feels about all of this? I think the story is developing well. I think you should go where the story is pulling you. That is always best. Good luck with the writing.