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November 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Cliffhanger! Please continue this, I wanna know what happens when he finds out he's a ghost.
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March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
what happened next?
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September 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Raven, I hope you update this story soon. I am dying to read the next chapter.
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February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Kyle's poor dad! This is enough to give him a heart attack!!!! Is Kyle going to confess or will he lie to him? And how is gonna explain it all to Michael. And speaking of Michael, Michael justs lets Kyle in, without even knowing him, just ready to take him on as a roommate? Very trusting! lol
Good chapter, I can't wait for the next one!
Good chapter, I can't wait for the next one!
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February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update to this story. It is so sweet. I was not expecting Kyle to run into his father again. I wonder if he will confess to being a ghost. I am also nervous that he made a deal with Ruelle without getting the details of his duties. The only part that you could expand a little is the part where he introduces himself to Michael. Maybe Kyle could give Michael a little more of an explanation since they have never met before. It is all so very cute. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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January 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you write. You also seem to think about all the weird little things that I think about all the time. I often wonder what if would be like to be a ghost and to gather the energy to touch things or make things move. I always tell my daughter that if I die early, I will come back as a ghost to watch over her. The story is beautiful. Life will be tough going for Kyle if he decides to come back to the world for Michael. There is no guarantee that Michael will love him back. I can't wait to see what he decides to do.
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January 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
No, no, go back to the woman!!!!! Oh wow, why wouldn't he take a chance that Michael would want him? He has to take that risk. Why be a ghost forever, if you don't have to? lol
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January 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter. Ok, so ghost boy killed the rapist; good. Just like he said; just like taking out the garbage!
But, I'm a little confused: when Michael met his friend, his friend had no idea what happened to him, so why would Michael ask him if he killed the guy? And how would his friend know who it was who raped him? And why did Michael question his friend, "...is that all you're going to say?" or something to that effect. It just seemed like such a strange conversation.
But, I'm a little confused: when Michael met his friend, his friend had no idea what happened to him, so why would Michael ask him if he killed the guy? And how would his friend know who it was who raped him? And why did Michael question his friend, "...is that all you're going to say?" or something to that effect. It just seemed like such a strange conversation.
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January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey Raven! Such an interesting story so far! I'm intrigued! How is this boy going to "contact" Michael?
And at the end of the second chapter, is that when he put his fist thru the other guy's stomach? When the guy went "Ahhhhh" and the other guy yelled boss? It was a little confusing at the end.
I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter! Great job!
And at the end of the second chapter, is that when he put his fist thru the other guy's stomach? When the guy went "Ahhhhh" and the other guy yelled boss? It was a little confusing at the end.
I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter! Great job!
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January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting! I can't wait to read more. It really is great idea for a story and I look forward to more.