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that fight scene was amazing :3 it's good to know they're good fighters, but not off the charts amazing, and retain faults. a lot of people like to have fight scenes in which the main chars are great amazing and it's not any fun after a while.

It's interesting to see how people on other planets deal with and view the same thing, as expected. I wonder what the military is going to do with all the people left. :o

amazing writing, though you might want someone to proof read for you. i'd do it, but i'm not too great when it comes to grammar, just noticed some spelling mistakes or wrong words. :3

Please do keep writing :D I await the next chapter!

I really like your stories, although I don't always have time to read them reguraly. Congratulations ! It's great that you manage to publicize. Anyway I enjoy the world you've managed to built in Nekolaus (lots of energy, originality and a huge potential) and I'm glad to see its sequel. For now I'll wait eagerly for a next chapter.

Aaaah. You're cute. Bend over... *walks right into a wall*

Here you have it. ONE of ELEVEN review hits ;)

TWO of ELEVEN review hits ;)

I wonder, if the review hits I'm giving now will place the review count of this story at 120. so it's like. 10 review per chap.
hits arnt' really reliable here on aff. . . thanks to all the stalkers.

THREE of ELEVEN review hits ;)
stalkers...

you get it right?

FOUR of ELEVEN review hits ;)

Four four. To magnuses galore. Lil kitty kitty cat is spread out on the floor.

FIVE of ELEVEN review hits ;)

Five five. Live it high.
Donnie wanted, dead or alive.

SIX of ELEVEN review hits ;)

Six six. pick up sticks.
I am suddenly, craving FISHsticks. 8D

SEVEN of ELEVEN review hits ;)

Seven seven. Seven heaven.
Grim orgasm-ed till he reached heaven.

EIGHT of ELEVEN review hits ;)

Eight eight. Virgin mate.
Kitty ate him. Piece of cake.