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for Neko-laus 2 : Toy Tiger

by kiix

person crazeme
schedule December 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The suspense is killing me. I started reading this story on a whim, well actually because I liked all the other stories that I have read of yours. I started with Neko-laus and didn't stop reading for three days. I absolutely love this series. Please continue soon. I can't wait to find out what happens after the crash. Maggie has so got to meet Neko's mother. And what's going to happen to Wendy. I can hardly wait for all the answers that I know you have hidden away in that pretty little head of yours.
person Melissa
schedule December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh yeah! Nice chappie. Cannot wait for more. Gotta have a big happy ending.
person Cupcak3
schedule December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So very happy to hear that you are going to have this story ended by the end of the year, while i do adore our Nicky i do miss our little merman! much love and hopes of never ending chapters lol
person maloanne
schedule December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good question! who would want to crash into a planet. Even a tree is already too much for me...
I am eager for the next chapter...
Bye
M
schedule December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Crash and Burn... but please... don't die.

THE END IS NEAR!!! I'm glad you bug yourself with a self-set time frame of sorts, it just means we readers get to read *A*
but it also shows that somewhere in that somewhat-insane brain of yours, you have a sense of order and semblance.
I hope this reassures you that you, are not - yet - completely insane. ^___________^

I hope you arn't offended by the word 'insane' directed at you. Coz well, I think anyone awesome has got to be insane somewhere in the brain. NO. ONE. can create such awesomeness , and still be a 'normal' person in my eyes.
btw, just so you know, Tentacles for the Brides Bouquet was the first ever story i read from you (coz I was going through a tentacles and mpreg phase). and that story just gave me an asthma attack. for real =__=

HAHA okay anyway. hope my odd, twisted sense of 'giving love' add's fuel to your fire~

BURN Kiix BURN!!! Make em CRASH AND BURN!!! xDDD

- nekoii
person hsu
schedule December 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OHMYGOD

WIRTE MOARRRRRRRR.
This was so great and captivating and exciting and I'm kinda bouncing up and down cheering for them to GO AND SURVIVE DAMN YOU.
Mack made me cry. I do hope that he gets a happy ending, please? Because I would hate for him and the latents to simply be cast off to the side when HQ gets that they come back from their "happy place" and remember their names again.
Also, Mags kissing Wendy - WTF I have ner quite "gotten" Neko the way I understood him in that moment, because I'd probably maimed Mags too. And Wendy of course, I mean- what the hell? Silly Mags, making Neko question your love!!!

I do hope that they will find the right planet to crash on and find Neko's mum and she better be happy to see her only son alive and well-cared for!!!
The only-5-chapters to go comment made me happy and sad too, because then this story arch will be over :( But I know/hope that you're going to end it with a bang and I'll be looking forward to these chapters.

So, lots of praise and gratitude --> equals more writing ;)

go on, you're awesome and this story rocks!
person Melissa
schedule December 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, was not expecting it that quickly. Keep it up can't wait to see how it ends.
schedule December 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like a scary plan but it seems like the only one. I just love Neko! Love the story and where it is heading!
person circe266
schedule December 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was very touching. I love the way you portrayed the men's preparations, Mack and his loyalty to Nicky, and the respect shown by the military men.

I am SO excited by the coming chapters -- I can't wait to read how they handle the 'crash and burn', and how they (hopefully) find Nicky's mother. Oh, and I would love to read a sexy threesome (or foursome!) with Grim.
person lone_child
schedule December 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thankies for the update! awesome writing as usual!