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April 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
XD that first part was all kinds of a snort laugh.good job :3
and now i'm sure that mack is scarred for life.
and now i'm sure that mack is scarred for life.
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April 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ch.10
cherry popped.
now time for some mayhem. XD
cherry popped.
now time for some mayhem. XD
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April 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
nuuuu clifffffhangerrrrr morrrrre!!
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April 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thought that Toy Tiger isn't virgin? I checked for proof and found it in your other story "Neko-laus". What do you mean in your story when Neko was attempting to bed toy tiger?
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April 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Gah! That was hot, and surprisingly sweet. You showed the emotion between them very, very well.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
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April 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thankies for the updaaate <3
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April 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes, Yes! Landfall! Called into action!
I'm going to review in reverse, because that chapter ending got me so excited.
In the sex, you emphasized the blow job more than the fucking. I liked that; and especially since its their first, and I think oral is more expressive. The nipple play drew me in; I like touch over clothing a lot. It's a harmless, subtle little transgression, that no-one thinks is transgressive...
Magnus panicked! He is not a natural bottom. That is now definitely confirmed.
The set-up for the battle is foreboding. With Magnus talking about how it's time to please his Mother/Father/empire, he sounds troubled about his role, something he hasn't let on before.
I'm going to review in reverse, because that chapter ending got me so excited.
In the sex, you emphasized the blow job more than the fucking. I liked that; and especially since its their first, and I think oral is more expressive. The nipple play drew me in; I like touch over clothing a lot. It's a harmless, subtle little transgression, that no-one thinks is transgressive...
Magnus panicked! He is not a natural bottom. That is now definitely confirmed.
The set-up for the battle is foreboding. With Magnus talking about how it's time to please his Mother/Father/empire, he sounds troubled about his role, something he hasn't let on before.
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April 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*purr* I'm loving this chapter! I can't wait until the next. There's just something about Magnus surrendering that's super hot.
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April 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
More MOre MORe MORE!!!!!
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April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ahh, love this story to bits and pieces! Hmmm... who's going to be seme... hmmmmm..... How about Nicky this time around please? Change the tune up a little :P