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for Oh Father!

by Blackrain7557

schedule December 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The only thing missing was the altar.
I was kind of disappointed with the change of setting - but well, Michael was going to lose it no doubt. :D
I hope the second part of this is coming soon!
I'd really like to see what happens next with Rhys and Michael - and Michael freaking out. ^_^;

Keep it up! :D
It was a good short read - and I like your humor. :3

P.S. please try considering an altar scene. ^_^;;
person Johanne
schedule April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved it =D

You know I was shocked when Rhys had the presence of mind to migrate them over to the bed. I don't think he's a tough and cold hearted as he thinks he does... Well, maybe at least where it comes to Michael? I really hope you continue this one, I'm really interested in seeing more of these two and how Michael reacts in the morning.
person L.S.
schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that poor priest : ( haha i feel as if he will be verrrry unhappy in the coming days with Rhys. lol cannot wait to read more!
person Anon
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!This story is so good^_^
R u going to continue this???
Plz do...

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