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by sorrowfall

schedule July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, yeah, this was extremely hard to read; I can't imagine how hard it must have been to write. God, poor Ryuu, he couldn't even help Sora and poor Sora, having to endure all that. I wonder if it's those bastards who beat them and raped Sora? The ones who are going after the band?

I was actually thinking of this story the other day; I'm glad it won't be abandoned!
schedule April 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God, so Rame went from juvie to prison? Did Kenta put him there; is that why he's after him?


I was kinda laughing (I know I shouldn't have), but I couldn't help it. So, having a dick up your ass makes you go to the bathroom a lot. Go figure! hahahahah I was like duh.....I always thought all that action up there really gets your intestines and colon working overtime! lol Ahhh, poor Kenta, should take some Immodium AD, or whatever it's called!

schedule March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, that's what I'd like to know: who is Rame??????? It sounds like it's someone from Kenta's past, someone who hurt him.

And boy oh boy was Ito perceptive! He hit the nail on the head! I was laughing so hard at the fact that poor Kenta thought his relationship w/Ryuu was on the downlow! hahahah Little did he know, everyone was talking about them!!!
schedule March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG, who would want to hurt sweet Ryuu? I can't imagine anyone who would want to hurt him. And speaking of Ryuu; he's such a girl!!!! Really; I could see myself thinking the same things as him; Kenta left (should have left a note!!!! He knows how Ryuu gets!), and Ryuu was feeling guilty and his imagination got the best of him and he thought the worst. Been there, done that!

I hope in the next chapter, Kenta and Ryuu can talk and Kenta can tell him how he feels about him. Not sure tho if Kenta should mention the phone call to Ryuu....
schedule March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry to hear about Entanglement. I miss Ruka and Dasuike! I will look forward to the new chapter when you're ready!

This was a good chapter! It's interesting to see the difference between characters when they switch positions! hahaha Good job!
schedule March 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
How pathetic are these so called "fans"? I mean, really, who would do something like that? Putting roofies (is that how it's spelled?) in a bottle for your favorite singer to take? Why would someone do something like that? I don't understand.

Thank God Ryuu's ok. I can't imagine, well, I can imagine how scared he was to hear everyone and not able to speak or move. I've had that situation in a hospital when I was coming out of recovery; you can hear everyone around you, but you can't move or speak. It's really scary.

I'm glad Kenta's doing better. I look forward to the next chapter!
schedule March 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank God Kenta's ok. But, I was a little confused at the end. Who were those people who saved Kenta? Does he know them? And who said "You're being a jerk"? Was it Kenta or Ryuu?r
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh God, thank God someone was there to help Kenta! Jesus, I thought for sure that was the end for him! I was on the edge of my seat reading this chapter!

Welcome back! I really missed this story and Dasuike and Ruka's story too!
schedule February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yep, you're right! I was expecting Ryuu's father to be a bigoted, nasty guy! Glad I was wrong!

But poor Kenta, having to endure a battery of tests when it was unnecessary!
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schedule February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hurry damn-it write faster I love this story, I like the twist were daddy is worried about Kenta health and then tells his boy to take care of him... that he needs healthy food to keep well... well I did not expect that... I think daddy's oh so cool! G