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January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello :D
Ugh, I hate writing the same review twice. The previous one has just disappeared :/
I'm so thrilled to see the thing going! I already like the characters :) Just pleeeeease, do not make them too typical. I love breaking schemes :]
Good luck!
I'm waiting for the next chapter.
Oh, and one very small suggestion - try to put an empty line (Enter) between paragraphs - it makes the text 'lighter', more clear, and easier for eyes :)
Ugh, I hate writing the same review twice. The previous one has just disappeared :/
I'm so thrilled to see the thing going! I already like the characters :) Just pleeeeease, do not make them too typical. I love breaking schemes :]
Good luck!
I'm waiting for the next chapter.
Oh, and one very small suggestion - try to put an empty line (Enter) between paragraphs - it makes the text 'lighter', more clear, and easier for eyes :)