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January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you write. It is so elegant yet comfortable and akdhlajdla! I can't describe it. I love your use of vocabulary and grammar. I am also in love with the characters. They all fit in perfectly. This story hasn't been done before from what I've read, and I've been reading aff.net stories for four years now! Please continue this until the end or I will die! Seriously! It's just soooo good. I'll be following your updates from now on. :D :D
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January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
He's gonna make Ravan cry if he keeps talking like that.
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January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. I have been enjoying it all this evening. Please keep up the good writing. I can't wait to see what happens to these two mer-boys.
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January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a fairly unique take on mermen. I'm curious to see if we will ever learn more about how this happened or why, and if more 'experiments' are going to be dumped out there with them.
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January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Logan does seem like a hard guy to read, but he sure does know how to survive...and he is a bit lonely. I liked the part when he was trying to teach Raven how to shave with a rock....and the adventure of looking through the sunken ship was good too...update soon!!
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January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i like this a lot and i cant wait for the next update.
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January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Shaving...bonds like no other. I really like how you have thought about how you would have things if you lived underwater. That makes it really cool.
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January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG! These two are so cute together! Logan seems like a sweetheart. I wish I could huggle them both. To me, the thing that would suck the most about being underwater would be not having a TV or computer or book to read. You would have to carve your slash fiction into wood or a rock.
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January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this! Good work!
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January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I read the first chapter and then went away without leaving a review. This was a story I had to think about for a while about whether or not I wanted to follow it.
I am glad with my decision to come back. The first chapter felt more like a prologue; short and to the point. Now that there is more, it flows much better.
Good work and can't wait for more!
I am glad with my decision to come back. The first chapter felt more like a prologue; short and to the point. Now that there is more, it flows much better.
Good work and can't wait for more!