schedule
January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
How sad, he is just a replacement.
schedule
January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, thanks for commenting on the Velvet Shadow! And I caught you! I was already following this story here and was wondering why the heroes were also called Raven and Logan like in the one you're posting at Xen's forum :P This ist a really nice piece of work, by the way - finally someone to do away with all the mermaid cliches^^
schedule
January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awww hot and sweet it was a nice chapter none the less and i rely am getting into this story and i thing that you are doing a great job regardless of what you think so keep you the good work!
schedule
January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awww! how cute. although i do wish there were more merpeople that those two could get more accquainted with....
looking forward to next chapter!! can't wait : )
looking forward to next chapter!! can't wait : )
schedule
January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like Logan's "subtle" moves he made on Raven. It was like he was fishing, waiting patiently until Raven was comfortable around him. Cute.
schedule
January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awwww thats so sad :( but a good plot chapter none the less and i rely cant wait to see how this unfolds it is such a good little story and it truly is a pearl! well cant wait for the next update.
schedule
January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think it's excellent. You need to watch some of the physics tho...
Did you feel queasy writing this story? I only ask because I was freaking out whenever I
imagined this under water world. I guess the images my mind produced was so vivid that my brain believed
that I was under water too! I was having a mini-panic attack. LOL.
I suppose that's a credit to you as a writer for creating such a realistic atmosphere and giving
my brain such stimulating descriptions.
Fantastic Work!
~WR
Did you feel queasy writing this story? I only ask because I was freaking out whenever I
imagined this under water world. I guess the images my mind produced was so vivid that my brain believed
that I was under water too! I was having a mini-panic attack. LOL.
I suppose that's a credit to you as a writer for creating such a realistic atmosphere and giving
my brain such stimulating descriptions.
Fantastic Work!
~WR
schedule
January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thanks for updating....
Logan sure has been getting hands on with Raven...and hey kissed...looks like their friendship is starting to grow into a relationship. Now we know what Logan has been hiding from Raven - that he had another lover Aron...that was so sad, with Aron killing himself and then Logan feeling so lonely and desperate.
Logan sure has been getting hands on with Raven...and hey kissed...looks like their friendship is starting to grow into a relationship. Now we know what Logan has been hiding from Raven - that he had another lover Aron...that was so sad, with Aron killing himself and then Logan feeling so lonely and desperate.
schedule
January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting concept. Poor guy, changed into a merman and dumped in the middle of the ocean. I can't wait to see where you take this story.
schedule
January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I found this story an dI am glad that I have.. It is really good.