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March 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, been trying to find Mer stories and I'm glad I found yours = 3= can't wait to see how it goes with the mermaid.
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January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is so cool. I can't wait for you to put the next chapter...I really like that they are going to find out if she is a true mermaid or like them and then if she is real then there could be a whole world for them to live....sorry got carried away with the possiblities.
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January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
your doing a good job and i love this story so many people give up on story's like this and that makes me sad i am glad that the reviews make you want to write more that makes me happy to think that i have such a great story to read almost every time i come to this site so thank you very much for making me happy and taking a peek into such a sweet world!
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January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Updates!
I'm curious to see if their plan will work.
I have a theory that Raven and Logan were sent down there
to reproduce with that crazy girl. Maybe increase the population
of merpeople?
Lots of support
~WR
I'm curious to see if their plan will work.
I have a theory that Raven and Logan were sent down there
to reproduce with that crazy girl. Maybe increase the population
of merpeople?
Lots of support
~WR
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January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
cool!! Ooooh I really hope that they find more merpeople. that would be interesting! A whole new world! Maybe some action and drama mixed in too once they realize that there are others like them. I hope those two find out who did this to them and why too.
I hope you don't abandon this and do start writing chapters again. I'm already looking forward to the next chapter!! Hope it's up soon.
I hope you don't abandon this and do start writing chapters again. I'm already looking forward to the next chapter!! Hope it's up soon.
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January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I wonder why the scientists left them...hmm...
oh, I like Raven's idea about trying to talk to the mermaid...maybe she is a real mermaid instead of an experiment...I like where this is going...update soon!
oh, I like Raven's idea about trying to talk to the mermaid...maybe she is a real mermaid instead of an experiment...I like where this is going...update soon!
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January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lovely! Very nice merman smex scene! Poor Raven was a good sport for putting up with the pain. I hope Logan is willing to bottom too. I thought it was interesting that Raven was homophobic in his regular life before being kidnapped. That really adds an interesting twist to his character. This chapter was very sweet. I am glad Raven was so supportive of Logan. I am eager to read the next chapter.
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January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thanks for another update...I didn't realize that you had updated...
Logan was so gentle with Raven...and the smex was a nice touch...it really brought the two of them together. Logan is going to show Raven where Aron is buried...also, for not ever being underwater, I think that you have captured the ocean quite well, along with the ocean critters...
Logan was so gentle with Raven...and the smex was a nice touch...it really brought the two of them together. Logan is going to show Raven where Aron is buried...also, for not ever being underwater, I think that you have captured the ocean quite well, along with the ocean critters...
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January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AWWW. Logan has a past merman loverr. ;; This is getting deep. I wish this chapter were a little longer. ;__; But it was very nice and sweet. Hope to read more. c:
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January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. The development of the romance between them is quite sweet and affecting.