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Ooh! Alex and Joson are so hot for each other. I loved their instant makeout scene. I think it was very realistically done with Alex trying to resist his attraction to Jason and getting a hard on at the same time. Matt really is the best. I got a good laugh when he asked about the pervert at the store. I wondered if it was the same guy who was always ogling Jason. I think Robert's story would be very interesting - is there any hope for the poor boy after his family tragedy? I can see how that would make a compelling story.

Hey, I just finished the Gay is Happy chapter, was that the name of it? I love Matt; he's adorable! Love the thank you Gay God! So funny!

Ok, I think of August as summer, July and August. If not, then there's only one month of summer and that's wayyyyyy too depressing for me! hahah

Ok, after going thru ALL the chapters again, I finally found out the discrepancy is Jason's last name. At the end of ch. 1, at the bottom, the line with ".......some weirdo with a creepy old guy name and a (something, reason, I can't read my own handwriting!) reason not to hang out with me, Jason Barakat, the black sheep.....". Anyway, there it is!

Ok, gotta go read the last chapter!

Oh, and I only remember Jason Brooks b/c I used to read those soap mags. He was on Days of Our Lives, which I've never seen, but I always thought he was really good-looking, so he and his name stuck in my mind!

Oh and I remember Jason Brooks b/c I used to read those soap mags and I know he was on Days of Our Lives, which I've never seen. I always thought he was good-looking, so I always remembered him and his name!

Shit! Sorry I repeated myself! I went to type in those stupid words you can never really read, and I hit the review button, but instead of the page going right to the reviews, it had a blank screen. That usually means the review didn't go thru, but I now noticed it did. So, sorry for saying the same thing twice!

Hahahaha, Matt is so funny; he waited until just the right moment to barge in! I wonder how long he was standing there?

I'd love to read a side story about poor Robert. You know, I didn't realize that it was Alex's house that the murders took place in. I thought when Alex and Jason were walking to Jason's house, they passed by Robert's old house and that's why Jason brought the whole thing up. I guess I didn't read it right.

Anyway, I look forward to their first date!

That was hot and totally unexpected so soon. Matt is just the most adorable little one. He needs to find a boyfriend for himself, school's starting soon right? Great chapters. Please continue, I'm intrigued. Kudos and cookies, darlin'.

Just read all of your chapters tonight. Really enjoyed it.. More soon please? -offers cookies and brownies-

Very interesting story. I would really like to see where this one is headed. Alex and Jason are just too cute in all of their awkwardness. Please continue and update soon.

I think Chapter 8 got cut off in the uploading. Can you check it out and upload again. There is only your author's note.