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person kylee
schedule April 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love chapter 12. I think Robert likes Matthew too. I hope they get together.
person kylee
schedule April 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13 was awesome. I think the story is perfect the way it is. You don't need to change a a thing. It has is own subtle flow. I actually like the way you have introduced the second couple. I cant wait to read more about Robert and Matthew.
person Juana13
schedule March 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awwww, seems Robert likes him, eh?
can't wait for the next chapter!! Hope they visit him again!!
schedule March 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you're back! I missed this story!

Poor Robert; he sounds so sweet. I'm betting Robert and Matt hook up; Robert WAS staring at this ass, after all! hahahah I think Mattie should start visiting Robbie every week!
person kylee123
schedule February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
They finally get to meet Robert. The asylum sounds like a scary place.
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Omg, I can only imagine how surprised Robert's gonna be to see three visitors! And two he doesn't even know! I can't wait to read about their visit!
person kylee123
schedule February 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. I love stories with incest so I thought it was great. I would love for a Matt and Alex and Jason relationship. I think they would fit together very well. I cant believe they were so naughty at the restaurant. I would love to know how Jason knows the owner. Of course it seems he is beloved by everyone in his hometown. I am off to read the story about Robert. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is that that must have been some restaurant!!!!! OMG!!!! I was actually embarrassed for Alex and Jason! How forward was Jason to do that in a restaurant?????? OMG, I would have rather crawled under a rock and hid for the rest of my life! Hahaha

Can't wait to read about the looney bin! lol
person Juana13
schedule February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
really liked that whole foot fetish thing ; ) Really different. I've never read something like that before. I'm glad you're not making Alex's mom a villian. She's like a misunderstood character. anyway can't wait to read what robert is like. And who is Matt gonna end up with? Oooh i hope his dream guy shows up soon! : ) Update soon please. can't wait!!
person Juana13
schedule January 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I just read this story and i am absolutely amazed with it! : ) I'm really smitten with Jason. I love his little family, and although he's bit of a bad boy I really like how he acts all cute around Alex. Oooh, I also love Matt. : ) I'm glad he left Jason and his brother so that they could 'make-up' (which I think was really hot by the way). I hope you have Matt find someone for him soon. Maybe another boy in the neighborhood, or something... He's such a cool character so far, so I really want to see if he ends up happy with someone too. : )
Too bad for Alex and Matt about their mother though. Maybe Jason can help?
And yes, I am quite interested in the mysterious boy named Robert. It's sad what happened to his family. I can't blame him for losing it. But where is the father? That's kind of messed up that he's still out there somewhere....
Anyway, as you can see I really like this story. I can't wait to read more of this. Looking forward to more updates from you, and i'll be counting down until you update the next chapter.
Hope it's soon!! : )