AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Freshman Year (On Hold)

by ZippoMotherLover

person Lex
schedule February 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
First, I want to say that I love luther and Deryn. I like how they interact and how cute Luther is. The rest of the gang seems awesome. Also I like how Luther isn't snobby or what eve even though he's parents seem to be. The fact that he wants to be a Tattoo artist is wicked. I really hope that you continue this story as well as your other ones. Your an kick awesome writer. ^_^. Please update as soon as you can!! :333
person Holly
schedule January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
:) sweet!
I really like this fic so far I look forward to the next chappies!
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh. I am in LOVE with this story!! kkjvnsjkfnekjfnwek. I am a sucker for high school stories, and I already adore Luther! He sounds so cuuute. And pfft, Deryn rocks. And Deryn + Luther = Me squealing like the fangirl I am. And the other couple, Erik and Jason?! Eeeeek. This story has got me seriously fangirling right now. I love everything about it. I am dying to read more, more, more! Lovely story~
schedule January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG, love the story!!!! LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT! I love Deryn's charasmatic ways; his friends, Jason and Erik seem so cute and BRAVE!!!

Great job! Looking forward to the next chapter!
schedule January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. The characters are really quirky and I love it. Makes me wish that guys like this went to high school at mine...
person JulesGer
schedule January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
huhu,
just want to tell you, that I like your story so far.
I love high school fics,espacially when they are good written like yours.:)
Luther is such a cutie and Deryn sounds sexy as hell. I`m a sucker for details, so I absolutly
love the describtions of your characters,now I can imagine them very well...
I wonder what Deryn thinks about Luther when he`s staring at him...hehe.
Please ubdate soon,Jules
person Anora
schedule January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your story is wonderful ^_^ it is very interesting, no spelling or grammer problems and not only about sex. I can't wait to read the next chapter :D
person kristina
schedule January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey I really like this, good job for a first go. I hope to see an update! :-)