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OMG it's so addicting. please update asap

I love it!!!
More please!!!

Holy fucking flying donkeys! that was intense and you left us wanting more! MORE MORE MORE! Girll....loved the chapter! can't wait to read his reaction... :)

Ooh! I knew learning to ride with Jaycen would ve good! And now he knows about Kaleb. I hope he give her a chance to explain how long she has been trying to get away from him. The next few chapters should be nice and tense. I can't wait!

Loved it....she's totally gonna kiss him again lol....i just know it haha....Can't wait to see what more your bringing to these two....

'Tis the season for float trips, but I don't think they brought nearly enough beer (and no jello shots!). I wouldn't say that Jaycen was a "perfect" gentleman, but thats why we like him so much. Its interesting that Ash didn't say that she wouldn't let him kiss her. I wonder how that will go? Update soon.

Heeey it's been awhile....i'm glad you updated....i've been wondering where you have been....Great chapter...MMMMWAH! I love it...!

So, Fallon knows about Kaleb? Is he going to fill in Jaycen? Jaycen giving riding lessons could be interesting! And I can't wait to see what his definition of a perfect southern gentleman is! Update soon.

Don't know if it was the liquid courage or if she is just getting a little more relaxed and comfortable, but i loved the second match and how she was intentionally using her body to distract Jaycen. Despite the interaction between the two, I think I loved the subtle and not so subtle reminders about Davi's relationship with them both. It's accepted that Davi is going to beat Jaycen. (though, by this point, I'm guessing he might think it worth it). I LOVED how calmly he discussed his lack of male pride and had no shame in admitting that women defeat him all the time in many areas. It showed that they both assume things about each other...first impressions aren't always accurate...it's a little Jane Austen. Can't wait for the next chapter and the reactions to that kiss.

I don't feel like this story is lacking at all! I love it!